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Reviews for Piccolo Learns

By : EchoedDreams
  • From Amanita on June 28, 2017

    Well thought out and the story concept is alright, but it is badly written. There are grammar issues and glaring context issues that make many sentences nonsensical. Maybe worth reading if you are patient enough to try to puzzle out what has been written, but it looks like there hasn't even been a proof-reading (or proof-publish-reading) by the author.


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  • From ANON - Rachel on May 10, 2016
    *sigh* Yet another unfinished fic that I find tolerable. Why is it that all the worst written fics are updated all the time, while everything readable always remains unfinished? And of course, it just had to end to end on a cliffhanger. Although, I have a feeling the mysterious person who interupted them is Nail.
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  • From ROGUEFURY on March 09, 2007
    OH MAN! I re-read this, and am deeply saddened that you haven't updated this in such a long time!!! ;c I hope to hind this updated soon.
    LATER. ROGUEFURY
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  • From ANON - Velasa on August 02, 2006
    Ok, ok. I can't believe I'm here reviewing this. But you say we should let you know if there should be more chapters and I'm forced to admit that would be a fantastic thing. You really do seem to write quite well- that's almost unseen in lemons o_O and you know how to build up anticipation and drama and be both sexy and really creepy but understandably in the character (if you take in their sittuations. The child of Kattatsu would have had quite some interesting issues if he grew up with that inside him)

    So how do we find out about new chapters again?
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  • From ArachneNonafel on May 22, 2004
    I lovw Piccolo and would love to see some more to this story! Please comtinue??
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  • From ANON - rogue on April 06, 2004


    i like it. I would also like a plot but with some good lemons.
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  • From ANON - mmhmm on February 21, 2004
    delicious
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  • From ANON - Jill on February 16, 2004
    I stil lread your stories. pic is is my boyfriend.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 26, 2003
    PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY!! I LOVE IT!
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  • From ANON - megitsune1 on October 22, 2003
    hey hurry up and update soon. it's really good. but wut's the girls name? is she like chichi or sumthing like that? andhey hey gonna fuck or wut? i mean come oey'ey're having all these daydreams about each other! so hurry up. it's really good. ja ne
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  • From ANON - Lily69 on October 17, 2003
    Finally! sorry I didn;t review last time. I almost gave up on this fic. 'Early Interaction' please continue!

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  • From ANON - Tokaia on September 10, 2003
    When are you planning on updating?
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  • From ANON - yasha on August 30, 2003
    Man, that was awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter. Please continue! I love your discription! I await your next upload with only my word of return. Farewell; abayo.

    *turns into a pile of black sand*
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  • From ANON - Namek Kaia on July 13, 2003
    This is good so far ^^ The lemon parts are great and the plot is interesting. Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Wandering Namek on July 05, 2003
    That was...um...*blushes* Wow. I really don't know what to say. The scenes from Piccolo's POV didn't do much for me, but the girl was pretty hot. *sheepish smile*
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