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Reviews for Dark Desire

By : Carisa
  • From ANON - Sue on June 27, 2003
    Oh man!! That was so hot!! Super build-up to a great lemon ^_~. Now is that Yamcha at the end or maybe one of Bulma's co-workers? I don't think the idiot's aware of the danger he'll find himself in if he messes with Veggie's woman. Can't wait for your next update :D.
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  • From ANON - Sue on June 27, 2003
    I was finally able to read chap #6 and just loved it. I like the way you made Veggie this time around. He showed her he cared by how he treated her not by saying it. The lemon was yummy too :D.
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  • From ANON - Mya on June 25, 2003
    Hi this is really getting good please e-mail me when u update this ok thanx...Keep up the great stories.
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  • From ANON - dbz obsessed on June 22, 2003
    I absolutely love your fic. It is truly awesome. It was a great change to see Bulma the one caught in the act instead of Yamacha and switching from Bulma's to Vegeta's POV is a wonderful way to move the storyline along. And the lemons....what can I say, fabulous is an understatement.
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  • From ANON - chritabeleve on June 20, 2003
    OMG, I loved it, hot, hot hot.I love your take on Vegeta. If you have a update list please, please add me. Thank you for a great read.

    christeve
    eve
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  • From ANON - mischief maker on June 18, 2003
    Wow! That's about all I can say right now. This was unbelievable. I can't even leave a worthwhile review, it was so good!! *drooling*
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  • From ANON - Meliza on June 18, 2003
    You know that scene where Bulma's mouth is in an 'O' shape and nothing comes out? Well, that's how I feel after reading this fic... It's just one slamming erotic scene after another. Jeez, and I'm supposed to walk around in public after reading this? :(

    Absolutely fantastic!
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  • From Lynnember on June 18, 2003
    This is a beautiful, passionate and compelling fanfiction. I love how you portray Vegeta. Dark, mysterious and protective. It makes me shiver.
    Wonderful writing. I hope there's more soon.
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  • From ANON - Sue on June 18, 2003
    Jesus Christ, that was so intense! Every chap was intense O_O. Excellent. Brilliantly written. Veggie was so IC that I wanted to punch him in the face. Bulma was somewhat weak, but it had to be that way to make the story work. Fantastic lemons! I can't say enough about this fic. Great job girl!!! :D.
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  • From ANON - hyperactivator on June 16, 2003
    I have read both your stories and I think they are exelent examples of erotic work please write more soon.
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  • From ANON - shaqueefa on June 15, 2003
    wow, this is the only vegeta/bulma get together story i have ever read that stays in character. this story seems to be the most legit way that they got together. good job. it's original and not dumb like the others. WHAO! wr! write more write more WRITE MORE!
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  • From ANON - Evil Saint on June 14, 2003
    I love this story so far! Please keep writing
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  • From on June 14, 2003
    Woot! Another of my favorites :D Hope to see more Vegeta-y goodness =^_^=
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