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Reviews for Lightening the Shadows

By : happyonna
  • From ANON - Lex on July 26, 2003
    Talk about cliffies..... You can't just leave things there!!!!!!!!!!! "Tis very well written & I'm anxious to see a resolution.
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  • From ANON - Anita on July 26, 2003
    Alright...now I don't want them to kill Wufei's REAL father! Just the man who posed as his father mind you.

    Good chapter btw! You really surprised me with Zech's little confession there. But I do like the turn of events :) It complicates matters.

    I am still voting for C ;) Let him be kidnapped by this Chang...that should anger the Shadowlords enough to do exactly what Zech already wanted to do to the man. You know, in hindsight I think Wufei is lucky to be sold to Duo. No harm has been done to him and he is better of with his own kind than with Chang.

    Next chapter!! *g*
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  • From ANON - Enna Namo on July 26, 2003
    Gasp, Wufei is Zechs son?????? Faints
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  • From ANON - Enamoùamo on July 25, 2003
    Talking horses? Cool. And Wufei gets one that likes him and already as disided to protect him even against Heero? lol Someone should warn Treize and Zechs. Or better not. Can't wait to see them getting chased by an angry horse.

    Just forgot something. Before Wufei might get kidnapped make him trust Duo, maybe even kiss Duo or being kissed by Duo. Something like that. Something that will Wufei give hope during what ever Treize and Zechs have planned.

    And what is Wufei? Has there been a prophecy about him or are his father and Treize and Zechs just guessing about him?
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  • From ANON - Anita on July 25, 2003
    ps: have you heard of the writer Mercedes Lackey? In her books Companions (who appear as horses) and their Chosen ones (humans with special Gifts; Heralds) are playing a major role. Nataku Choosing Wufei is just like a Companion Choosing her/his Chosen. I like it :)
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  • From ANON - Anita on July 25, 2003
    Aha...the plot thickens! The 'Gundams' are involved now as well.

    So...have you decided where this story is going to? I am still for C!!

    *presses the proverbial vote button a couple of times*

    That should do it :)
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  • From Deb on July 25, 2003
    Happy, happy, joy, joy.... Yes another chapter. *grin* I like the protectiveness of Nataku. I wish my horse was that nice, all he ever seems to want to do is chuck me off!
    And I will also vote again... C!!! It has to be C!

    www.gundam-wing-diaries.150m.com
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  • From ANON - The Falcon on July 24, 2003
    Ne, happyonna, have you ever read Mercedes Lackey? If you haven't then perhaps you should. What you've just described is just like the Companions of Valdemar that Choose the Heralds. This isn't a complaint mind you, just a note. I love the new chapter, and can't wait to see what you're going to do with the Shadow steeds and the others! And though I've already voted once, I'm going to reiterate, C!!!!!! C is the first letter of my real first name, so it's fate ome ome shit! You have to pick C!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^~^
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  • From Deb on July 23, 2003
    I'm so glad you are updating this regularly. I check each day to see if my next *dose* is available. Can't wait to see what you have planned for Wufei's dad. *evil grin*
    *huggles*
    Shen

    http://gundam-wing-diaries.150m.com
    The home of ShenLong
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  • From ANON - The Falcon on July 22, 2003
    *stirs something with a wooden spoon and scrutinizes it carefully* Ah the plot is thickening nicely... ^^ Tiny question...are we going to see any of Duo's past? How old is he, is he the one ruling, and if he is, where are his parents...did they die or something? And what exactly is a Shadow Lord? Not questions you have to answer right away, but perhaps something to think on... Ah, but I can't wait for further chapters... Keep up the good work, and no real problems with this chapter that I could see... ^^
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  • From ANON - nikki on July 22, 2003
    hey it me again love the story very interting chapter if i do say so my self please up countue with your story its great to read and find out what kind of demon wufie is and to find whats up with his father i defitly dont like wufies father so i so hope some one kills him and good but i dont like that my fie fears duo thats why the frather must die mamamama ok enofe of me bab wri write more please thanks so much
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  • From ANON - nikki on July 22, 2003
    i would like a combination there of the choes you gave i love this story please and i mean please write more of this storlovelove love it nikki

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  • From Deb on July 21, 2003
    Ahhh the plot thickens even more.... I'm with The Falcon on this here, there are a few grammatical errors here and there but they don't take away fthe the fic which incidentaly is one of the better slave/master fic's I have read in some time and definately on my current list of fic's to *save* to be enjoyed time and time again.
    Hmmm choices.... I think after much consideration I would go with c. Yup, c. I'd love to see what torture Duo doo Wuo Wufei's father but like the others I don't think Wufei should be around when it happens though, maybe have Quatre stay with him to comfort & tend him after his ordeal with his father while Duo, Heero and Trowa take care of the horrible man.
    Whichever way you decide to go I will certainly be looking out for the next instalment, so keep them coming.
    *huggles*
    S^_^
    ^_^

    http://www.gundam-wing-diaries.150m.com The home of ShenLong
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  • From ANON - Anita on July 21, 2003
    ai ai...hard choice there.

    A) Nope; I don't think Wufei would run away now, once he gets over his fear for Trowa and Heero, he would probably be relatively happy where he is now. And apart from that, Duo would find him in a heartbeat because of the collar.

    B) Nope; After they are through with Wufei's father, I don't think there is much left of the man to come back and cause trouble.

    C) Hmm...yThisThis has potential :) Just don't let Wufei watch when they kill his father, that will probably traumatize to much. I sense a lot of comfort here!!

    ps: what is it with the colouring of that collar!? It is something important, since you have mentioned it twice (or thrice)...so, tell us! *bg*

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  • From ANON - Enna Namo on July 21, 2003
    Let them find Wufei's father and take him to the castle. Duo will send him to the dungeons. And as you said, Treize and Zechs haven't been introduced to the scene yet. They might stumble upon Wufei's father and use his hate to their advantage. I somehow have the impression that those two might not like Duo that much but want the power for their own. So to be rid of Duo, at least for some time, they persuade Wufei's father to kidnap his son and while Duo is away looking for Wufei they try to take over the throne. But I don't want Wufei to get tortured. He has suffered enough. Well, maybe just a little. His father could lock him in a dark room with no food and no water, something like that.
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