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Reviews for Lightening the Shadows

By : happyonna
  • From ANON - The Falcon on July 20, 2003
    Okay, one question at a time. If you don't want to spend the ti-mai-mailing everyone, then I'd say, yes, have an A/N page. Yes you cleared up the mistakes on the fourth chapter, but I think you did this one in .doc format again... Ah and for the last reader's choice one, I'd say c!!!!!!!! C, all the way baby!!!! Ah, now for comments...^.^ Is your name happyonna or slavetothemusessometimeshappyonna? v.v Course not that I can say much, I am slave to the muses too...*hugs happyonna* Don't let the muses...or anyone else (me included if that's what I've been doing) push you around. Unless of course you get the uber-big-can't-let-it-get-away inspiration... I mean you'll get the story done eventually, right? Hmm...I think this is long and complicated enough...Keep the wonderful stories coming!!!!!
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  • From ANON - The Falcon on July 20, 2003
    Hmm...what to say about this...were you rushed by any chance? There seem to be more mistakes grammatically, though not spelling ...y...you have a lot of things not capatlized that should be. Content is still great, but the other mistakes take away from it...Ack, the letter! What's with the letter?!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter, but don't sacrifice the piece's integrity for getting another chapter out... ^.^ Still and all it's shaping out to be a great fic!
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  • From ANON - Enna Namo on July 20, 2003
    Wufei's question puzzled me. "Why does anyone want to hurt me?" In every of the last chapters Wufei was afraid of just that happening from however was near him. And now, suddenly, out of the blue he is asking WHY someone would want to hurt him????? That isn't logical.
    Aaawwwwww, Wufei wondering if Duo is tickelish, sweet. And that poor guard, lol, what else will yu put him through?

    A letter written in Wufei's blood? Must have been written before his asshole of a father sold him. But why?

    Next chapter please.
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  • From ANON - Enna Namo on July 19, 2003
    It is suprising to see Wufei curl up to Duo while he is asleep and being afraid of him the moment he awakes. Or will that change once he gets used to find Duo at his side every morning? I hope so. But why is it so difficult to find Wufei's father? Does he have a reason to hid? Does Wufei's father know that all he told his son was nothing but a lie?
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  • From ANON - The Falcon on July 18, 2003
    ^_^ So kawaii!!! What more can I say? I'm happy, okay, ecstatic that there'll be a sequel to 'Defiled' and can't wait to read it! Do you realize that with your three stories you have literally reduced me to sitting on the edge of my seat in anticipation? Well congratulations on another great chapter!
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  • From ANON - The Falcon on July 18, 2003
    ^.^ Pretty! Gonna be a lemon next chapter? *drifts away dreaming about 1x3x4* *clears throat* Eh heh, sorry 'bout that. Um, don't know if you know, but your apostrophes and quotation marks are messed up, and make it harder to read the story. Otherwise a thoroughly enjoyable chapter... Thank you for updating so quickly, I'll be back tomorrow to check up on you!
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  • From ANON - Enna Namo on July 18, 2003
    Yeah, the big bad Duo-Wolf, sorry- Duo-God of Death is going to punish that piece of shit that happens to be Wufeis father. But what will happen if Duo will let Wufei watch him do so? Wufei would be certain that Duo really is as bad as his father told him.
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  • From Deb on July 18, 2003
    I'm so glad you have updated this so quickly, I'm really enjoying how the plot is beginning to unfold. Keep it coming! *huggles* Shen ^_^
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  • From Deb on July 17, 2003
    Now this is shaping up to be an interesting fic. I like what you have done with it so far and hope it's not too long inbetween updates. More soon please. :)
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  • From ANON - The Falcon on July 16, 2003
    Must...have...more! Please update soon! I beg of you! I really want to see what the hell is going to happen... *small voice* Please?
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