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Reviews for Ai no Kakarotto

By : Tairyn
  • From ANON - jaygoose on February 17, 2004
    Okay, so it took me all day but I read all ten chapter so far. I love this fic. It was planned out pretty well. I wish I was better at planning fics. I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Radditzsu on February 16, 2004
    How do you do it? This fic just keeps getting better. I am absolutly hooked! I must have more as soona s possible. And your lucky you've got G-Mum at your back she won't streer you wrong!
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  • From ANON - Hecate18 on February 13, 2004
    Hi! Sorry about reviewing so late, its because I've had a cold for the last week (still do) and basically I feel (and look like) sh*t. U_U
    Anyways that was a great chap, learnt alot more about the characters now, like Raditz is Kakarots brother (I didn't know they were related in this fic, and with the prophecy its all getting a bit mysterious. But its kinda all begining to add up. As alway's, I'm really looking forward to reading the next chap. ^_^

    BTW, thanx for the review, I've been considering getting my fics beta read but i don't know how. O_O
    If you know anyone who could help please email me ^-^
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  • From ANON - Raditz on February 08, 2004
    This story just got beyond awsome, but still you have to watch for the simple mistakes, Like this "The said old friend said sipping from his cup." remeber to re -read until you just can't stand to anymore, or get a really freaking good beta! Please please post soon! I can't get enough of this dark angsty fi, And damn what I wouldn't give to know Vijita's motives!!!!!

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  • From ANON - Monique12 on February 08, 2004
    Darn it... Not many people are reviewing!!
    Its obvious a lot of people like this fic. If you don't believe me, just look at how many hits you have. You have the most I've seen.
    Anyway, I must say I LOVE this fThe The first time I read it was when you first posted it on Mediaminer and I have always liked it even though there were always grammer errors. I would re-read and check daily just to see if you updated or not and I remember being upset when I found out that your fic wasn't there anymore. Then I ended up finding it here and with a new chapter and now, I come here daily hoping to see it updated.
    This is my first review to any fic and I must say that I love where you havken ken this story and I hope you will continue to post. I just can't wait until all the secrets are out in the open and when Kakarotto will surrender. I want to know what happens next! I promise to review your other chapters when they come. PLEASE update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - gokumum on February 06, 2004
    Always more, you tha that I am hopelessly addicted to this wonderful fic.
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  • From ANON - Katie on January 23, 2004
    I totally love this story. You're a great, inspirationall writer. Please please write more. I can't get enough! I'M HOOKED!
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  • From ANON - Fluffy on January 20, 2004
    Ack! You just had to leave it off like that. O well, i'm waghting for your nupdaupdate. {Twitch Twitch} I hope its soon.
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  • From ANON - Hecate18 on January 20, 2004
    Once again brilliahap,hap, this fic truely is a work of art. (And all the other fics of yours I've read.)
    I just love the way you portray the characters, Vegeta let Kakarot mark him, in a way that is so emotional beautiful, how could Kakarot leave him...and poor Raditz, he is so in love with the Ouji, i feel kinda bad for him. (sorry getting to caught up in the drama there U_U;)
    Anyway's i neeeed to read more, please update soon ^_^
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  • From ANON - Radditzsu on January 11, 2004
    Oh yes the Vegeta POV was splendid! I loved ever tantilizing second of it, but my dear there are still a few spelling and grammer errors you have a tendency to leave out words here and there small words like, a, it, or ,the for example if you like I will point them out for you, but it's didn't effect my enjoyment of thre story at all so don't worry and I'll be egerly waiting your next chapter!

    -raditz
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  • From ANON - Radditzsu on January 11, 2004
    Yes reviewing is super importaint, with out my lovely reviwers I'd never get anything accomplished.

    I must say this story is delisciously angsty and provocitove. I keep wondering when that tail of Kakarotto's is going to grow back and the shit ts going to hit the fan, you did have a few grammer issues, the only one I recall is that you said "what you do?" instead of 'what did you did" and you made a few mistakes liek this but nothing major, also your formatting was screwy in this chapter, you know strange symbols in place of some puncuation, but sometimes that can't be helped much.

    I really hope you decide to continue this story it's deserving of your attention.

    -Radditzsu


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  • From Hecate on January 08, 2004
    The chaps were really good in Veg's P's POV, it helped me understand what Vegeta was feeling.
    I feel really bad for Vegeta, yet i understand why Kakarot ran away.
    I'm looking forward to the next chap ^_^
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  • From ANON - Hiriyou on December 27, 2003
    Well girl I gotta tell ya, lol, you just keep dishing out the angst dontcha? But hey! I'm not complaining! ^_~

    Haven't heard from you in awhile, forgotten I exist or just nothing to talk about? Hey, mail me sometime if you want to chat okay? I've been busy lately but it'd be nice to hear from a friend.

    ~Hiriyou
    "Power to the gerbils!"
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  • From ANON - CrazyGurl on December 19, 2003
    WOW!!!!!! Lemme say one thing AWESOME!!!!! I love it! The story you have going here is perfect! Ooh I love, love, love how Kakarott continues to try and resist Vegeta and how insistent s ons on defeating him. Vegeta is so in character. I love how he continues to be himself but he drops little hints that shows he wants Kakarott to care for him the same way he cares for Kakarott. DAMN YOU!!!! For making me like a fic so much when Goku is not dominanat!!! YOU PEOPLE ARE GOING TO DESTROY ME WITH YOUR DOMINANT VEGETA'S!!!! I can't heut lut love this story it is excellent. ~maybe a dominant Vegeta isn't so bad~ What am I saying? Please continue!!!!!!!!!!!! *.*
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  • From ANON - SaiyajinFireFly on December 19, 2003
    ::hugs story:: I FREAKING love this story! It is sooo good. I love the idea of this...Kakarott doing Vegeta's bidding all the while still waiting for himself to get strong enough to take his revenge out on the Prince. This story is breathtaking! I love how Vegeta is falling for Kakarott and everything I love everything!!! THIS STORY IS MY FAVE!!!!!!!!!!
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