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Reviews for Heaven Sent

By : Arria
  • From ANON - fruits of Eos on July 05, 2005
    egods! cliff hanger! nooooooo! update update! i love the plot and advancement so far, so keep writing more! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Princess2000204 on October 09, 2004
    I really like this story, and your betaing aren't doing a very good job. I've seen quit a few grammar mistakes. I hope you get the creativity for this back real soon ^_^
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  • From ANON - WC on September 05, 2004
    This is very interesting. Why'd you stop writing? I'm curious as to what wil happen n WC%
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  • From ANON - AngeloflightPd on January 30, 2004
    I like this chapter can't wait until Trowa and Quatre finds the killer.
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  • From ANON - AngeloflightPd on January 10, 2004
    I just started reading your story and I really like it. I hope you up date soon; I would like to know what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Candy on November 02, 2003
    *gasps* OH MY GOSH!?! Another victim? Doesn't ANYONE suspect anything?! All the victims are MALE and BLON..QU..QUATRE!!!!! *sighs* And that feather...Wait, it carom rom Quatre right? He's an Angel? *jumps up and down* But how come he was staring at it like he's never seen it before? maybe he doesn't know he's an Angel yet. *thinks* Hmmm...I wonder what was found on the feather...I really hope Trowa and Quatre become closer. And Trowa doesn't seem to have those nightmares anymore, but it still means his life is in danger, right? Though it couldn't be the killer because he's not blonde. But in his dream SOMEONE was trying to kill him and an Angel (probably Quatre...OOO! I hope it is! ^-^) was trying to save him. PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE update soon, k?!?! I'll be checking back!!! This is really mysterious! Do we know the killer? Is it one of the characters we all ready know?!?! UPDATE SOON!
    luv,
    Candy
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  • From ANON - R_Winner on October 09, 2003
    This is getting soooooooo Goood! FINISH IT PLEASE!!!!! Pretty Pretty PLEASE!!!!
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  • From ANON - The Falcon on September 30, 2003
    Okay, two things, 1) WRITE MORE SOON!! I love it, and it's not so crappy as you think. The plot is well-thought out, and while may not be unique it is at least refreshing. I really like how the characters are turning out. 2) I can't believe your beta-reader dropped you!! Oh well, look your mistakes in chapters two and three were all small and common. If you don't have a beta-reader I humbly ask if you'd like one. Please e-mail me if you'd like to take me up on the offer. I am very thorough, and will generally get the chapter/fic/whatever back to you before two days' time.
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  • From ANON - Candy on September 25, 2003
    YES!!! Another update!!! Well, Quatre seems to be taking over, maybe that's why Trowa doesn't like him. I mean, Quatre's great at his job! Hmm...those killings do sound very professionally done. *gasps* Wait a minute...a blonde MALE is next?! less than 5'6.uldnuldn't Quatre qualify under that? And he does look extremely innocent for his age. *nods* Doesn't Trowa realize he has to protect him? Maybe if Quatre has a near-death experience with the killer but escapes some attack or something, then Trowa will realize he has an obligation. I wonder what accident happened that made Trowa have to write reports? Why does he think Quatre's so annoying? He's only trying to be kind...then again he's doing everything right, something that Trowa never did so maybe it's jealousy. Hopefully it'll soon turn into friendship...then something more. *grins* Hmmm...UPDATE THIS VERY SOON!!! I'll be checking back!!
    luv,
    Candy
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  • From ANON - Shadow Cat on September 22, 2003
    Hey! I hope to see a new chapter soon! This was a well written story and can't wait to read more!!!! That dream and details you could really see what you where describing!!! Continue!!
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  • From ANON - Jaimi on September 18, 2003
    well dear i am loving this story. i just adore how you have portrayed trowa and quatre. i mean we always see them as tro being the quiet but loving good guy and quatre as the naive little ball of love for everyone. you made them real people and well this a story to read if you want a littlre. re. if you ever get a road block or your muse takes a nap i would be honored to help i love this story and keep on writing .... pretty please i will give you a cookie
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  • From Ayami on September 18, 2003
    This is an excellent story!
    The story is interesting, the writing style is very good, you're a great writer!
    Quatre is my favorite character, and you pen him so excellently.
    Great job! I love your fic, I hope you'll update soon.

    Ayami

    my vote: +++++

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  • From ANON - Cloudy daze on September 13, 2003
    Yay! Trowa and Quatre together is always fun to read. Its such an interesting story. I like the whole coming down to help save Trowa from pretty much himself. *grins* Keep up the good work. *bounces* Can't wait for the next chapter. ^^
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  • From ANON - Candy on September 13, 2003
    YAY!!! AN UPDATE!!! *grins* Gosh, Trowa sure is a jerk! But at least we can tell they both think the other is very attractive. ^-^ That's a good sign. *giggles* Quatre's so cute when he's scared. I think he had the right idea going out and buying things. Trowa shouldn't be so angry, Quatre used HIS money to make TROWA'S apartment better for the both of them. But I guess Trowa is stubborn and he doesn't want to admit that. If Quatre was assigned to him as a partner then that must mean they have a case to work on. But the officers said the chief didn't want Trowa near any crime scenes, so what will they do? I don't mind watching them just get closer *grins* But some action's nice too! UPDATE ASAP!! I'll be looking bacK!
    luv,
    Candy
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  • From ANON - Candy on August 30, 2003
    This is such a great story so far! ^-^ I think that's so wonderful how Quatre (i'm assuming it's Quatre) is an angel trying toe Tre Trowa from death. He must be Trowa's guardian angel. But it's only a dream...or maybe Trowa's having a premonition of what might happen to him in the near future. Maybe it's so he can realize he should've taken the hand extended to him. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
    luv,
    Candy
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