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Reviews for Tainted

By : ArchNemesis
  • From ANON - BlackFire on October 21, 2012
    That was not what I expected it to be it was sad when it said that they both died then it was funny when vegeta commented on his grave-stone and then soooo adorable and unforgetable at the end. That was so AWESOME!
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  • From OfTheBlue on April 22, 2010
    Um, it's a nice story, but I think it's missing a chapter. one second were at the doctor passing out the next she's trying to revive 'geta. ??? when did he die?
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  • From auronsgirlfriend on July 30, 2008
    what the hell?!!! so they faked thier deaths?!!! 0_O......that's the worst edning i've read.
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  • From Jags on July 25, 2008
    pretty damn good
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  • From MeggieBeggie on February 06, 2008
    Kay, I really liked this until the last chapter. Who did it? Where did he take Goku? How the hell did Vegeta die? I mean, I can assume he faught to the death for Goku, but there weren't any mentions of wounds or anything. Basically all my questions can be summed up with "What the hell just happened?" I get how they got back at least.
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  • From ANON - aarika on February 08, 2004
    the ending was a little bit of a let down, but all in all i thought the story was really good.
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  • From ANON - Jaimi on December 27, 2003
    loved the story but the ending chapter just confused the hell out of me. i was just like huh what and had to reread it at least 3 times to fully get all of it. i mean did you just finally get fed up with the story an just said fuck it and lets end it as quick as possible. i mean it is a great story just that this last chapter could have been done better led us up to it allow us to be really able to grasp what was going to happen then pilling it on us in all one lump some. other wise good story
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  • From ANON - Daishi\'cha on September 11, 2003
    This is a great story so far, but I don't think that Yamcha is as innocent as he's portraying himself to be. I think that he got Puar to shapeshift into him in the hospital while he was out drugging Vegeta and raping Goku. It's either that, or he's learned Tien's technique w he he can split himself in two or three copies of himself.

    Keep writing, I can't wait to find out what happens next!
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