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Reviews for Wet Fantasies

By : squeaky
  • From on December 28, 2009
    Ewww... I hate watersports, but the way you wrote this is just so erotic. You are a great author to take one of the four kinks I hate and have me enjoy it. I love where you started this fic off. You totally set the mood and a plausible explanation on why Gohan or Piccolo would even think of having watersports enter their future 'relationship', which I didn't think possible. I loved this story and I hope you continue this.

    PLEASE ADD MORE!
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  • From DetoxAngel on February 23, 2007
    Ahh, people who don't like this can screw themselves! They were given fair warning and if they didn't know what 'watersports' were, then they had no business attempting to find out. Ahem...anyway, this was strange when I frist read it a few years back and it's a little wierd now. Probably because Gohan is a little boy and Piccolo peeing was about all he was interested in. Still, it was okay and I won't knock you, but if you really like that stuff, there should be older characters and better plots. Just saying...*shrug*
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  • From nahleili on February 22, 2007
    Um. Whoa.
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  • From ANON - Lisa on January 05, 2006
    Ah, I always love a good pissing story.
    If you wrote more I'd definately read it.
    =)
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  • From Michirusan on April 22, 2004
    This story is hot. I'm serious. O_O I really really enjoyed that, unexpectedly. Thank you for writing it!
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  • From ANON - VegetaDaimoh on February 19, 2004
    i feel like a pervert. hell, i am. but damn it, i liked your story and i would read more if you wrote. i'm female but i kinda understand... >.
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  • From ANON - ... on December 02, 2003
    mmm! Pissing!
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  • From ANON - Senkensha on October 13, 2003
    Uhm Okay ...I know most people are into different things..but you take the cake. This wasn't even well written. It was one long paragraph about Piccolo and Gohan pissing. This was just a horrid..horrid fic.
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  • From ANON - megitsune on September 25, 2003
    ok that was really disgusting. ok i think yaoi is ok and everything but no that just draws the line. im amazzed that ppl read this story and u wrote it. gross. so ja ne
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  • From ANON - Precious on September 22, 2003
    Uh, yeah. That was kinda nasty! To the person above: At least you got through the first chapter. I barely read half of the first chapter it was so unappealing.
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  • From ANON - terry on September 21, 2003
    I'm sorry. I love the pairing, but not the subject. I read chapter one and I can't go any further, but for readers who enjoy this, continue on.
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  • From ANON - some person on September 21, 2003
    0_0.... ewww. No ofense or anything, but basing a story on pissing isn't perverted or pleasurable, it's disgusting. In yaoi, penis' are used to spasm semen, not pee, at least not CONSTANTLY. Your writing ability's pretty good, but please change the subject. That was just.... ughh, they couldn't have whacked off and came insteand?
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  • From ANON - MidoriNite on September 21, 2003
    er..interesting. It's a good story if you're into that kind of stuff, but a bit weird if you're not. You're a good writer though. I think you should write another Gohan/Piccolo story, just leave out the....um...golden showers. ^.^

    ~Midori Nite
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