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  • From ANON - Toka on September 22, 2011
    lol...awesome story...I like the way you simplified all the embryology stuff...xD God only knows how terrible trying to learn all of it was *doing embryology in med-school*

    Great story. I read till chapter 23 and so far, I love it.
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  • From Mieren on March 09, 2009
    Yay! I finally had time to get to the end! Great story. Now I'm off to read the second one. ^_^
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  • From Mieren on March 09, 2009
    Not a gun person, are we? ^_^
    You can't tell what kind of gun a bullet came from. The size of the bullet or the type can usually fit a number of guns. After a bullet is fired, scoring along the bullet can later be matched to the barrel of the gun. Nice try, though.

    Oh, and the whole magnets in the vent idea was already busted on Mythbusters. It can be done, but it's slow and loud.

    I was just waiting for you to pull the premature labor. Yay! More excitement for the poor boys.
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  • From Mieren on March 08, 2009
    OMG. I can actually see guys getting all the baby things wrong like that. That's great.
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  • From Mieren on March 08, 2009
    Heh. I'm Mormon. No offense taken at all, but let me assure you, telling a missionary that wouldn't scare them off. We're pretty accepting people, despite how badly the media has smeared our image. Trust me, they have everything *dead* wrong. Oh, and contrary to popular belief, we do have a sense of humor. ^_^
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  • From Mieren on March 02, 2009
    I know I'm probably very late in reviewing the event since I'm just now reading the fic, but congrats on the baby! *huggles*
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  • From Mieren on March 02, 2009
    The heart starts beating at day twenty... But the biologist digresses...
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  • From Mieren on March 02, 2009
    "You'll get fat." That's funny. Looking forward to him freaking when he finds out.

    Don't mean to rain on the story, but ovaries are just testes that didn't descend. For Duo to have one, he should only have one nut. That and hermaphrodites are dual sterile. I'm a biologist... things like that tweak my stupid picky mind no matter how much I love the story. No matter! I still love 02 mpreg! ^_^
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  • From Mieren on March 01, 2009
    Yay! Love the 1x2 lemons! It's even better since it's well written and seems to have a plot so far. And now the added bonus! MPREG!!! =^_^=

    Must... read... more...
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  • From dolphina23 on January 28, 2009
    I have a feeling where this is going and am intrigued enough on how you intend to portray this particular medical malformation and its possible results to continue, even though Gundam is a fandom I'm unfamiliar with.

    Just a note, chaemerics, or chaemerism in humans, is NOT a term used for hermaphrodites but a term used to define those born with the DNA of their twin that somehow or other died in uetero and that DNA was then absorbed into the body of the survivng twin, leaving them with two different sets of DNA.
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  • From NoirAnge on August 29, 2007
    Shenlong... I cannot say how much I enjoyed this fic. Easily the longest one I've read, it was worth every minute... including the ones of lost sleep (like my entire last night, as it is not 7am, lol). I cannot imagine the amount of work you put into this. The research alone, let alone the time to write and plan and everything else.... I'm amazed you could do it in as little as two years! I'd say more but the lack of sleep is getting to me... thank you so much for the time and effort you put into this, it has been an absolute joy to read, and I look forward to the sequel ^_^
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  • From ANON - Squiz on January 03, 2006
    You...are fuckin' awesome.
    I admire you..so...so much. Thankyou for writing such an exelent peice, and thankyou for posting it on this site so that people can read it. It was breath takingly brilliant, It took me weeks to read it with my limitted internet access, but the time I dedicated to it was worth while. I only hope that one day I can be as good as you. Your an inpuration to everyone, especially me. Rest assured, that if and when I get an account on this site, I will remember to reccoment this story to others. Thankyou again for the absoloutly amazing adventure this story took me through, I enjoyed reading this, and it brought me great pleasure to read about the two creating such a blessed child. Good luck in future projects, to dedicate 2 years of your life to this, is simply wonderful.
    **#squiz#**

    P.S. Im sorry I couldnt leave an e-mail, but I dont know weather or not my e-mail is veiwable to other reviewers who could be potentially dangerous. I wouldnt like freaks contacting me.
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  • From ANON - Squiz on January 03, 2006
    You...are fuckin' awesome.
    I admire you..so...so much. Thankyou for writing such an exelent peice, and thankyou for posting it on this site so that people can read it. It was breath takingly brilliant, It took me weeks to read it with my limitted internet access, but the time I dedicated to it was worth while. I only hope that one day I can be as good as you. Your an inpuration to everyone, especially me. Rest assured, that if and when I get an account on this site, I will remember to reccoment this story to others. Thankyou again for the absoloutly amazing adventure this story took me through, I enjoyed reading this, and it brought me great pleasure to read about the two creating such a blessed child. Good luck in future projects, to dedicate 2 years of your life to this, is simply wonderful.
    **#squiz#**

    P.S. Im sorry I couldnt leave an e-mail, but I dont know weather or not my e-mail is veiwable to other reviewers who could be potentially dangerous. I wouldnt like freaks contacting me.
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  • From ANON - WickedGame on January 03, 2006
    re: chapter 93

    i wonder, did you know that duo's vows are based on a poem by elizabeth barrett browning? one of my faves in fact.
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  • From ANON - Starbuck on December 22, 2005
    You made fiction into a reality, congratulations.
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