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Reviews for Whisper

By : AnimeFetish18
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on January 27, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Your last chapter is not there can you put there please?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on August 15, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - lestat on July 15, 2006
    wheres the last chapter
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  • From ANON - lestat on June 26, 2006
    Wheres the last chapter
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  • From ANON - lalamoon on January 03, 2006
    this one is good. more soon?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on April 07, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Fyre D3vyl on January 02, 2005
    NOOOOOOOOOO!!!
    ch8 doesnt work for sum reason....NOOOOOOOO!!!
    PLZ PLZ PLZ check it..T.T...I NEED TO FINISH READING THIS!!!

    btw...great story!
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  • From ANON - Forgotten Beauty on October 23, 2004
    I really liked that story and although it makes your other story sound alot like it. Anyways, great job and please try to update on your other story so i can read it!
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  • From ANON - trunks_pan fan on August 11, 2004
    .....I just loved the ending and I LOVE this fic. I just couldnt stop reading it. When Pan lost her memory now THAT surprised me but it turned out good.
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  • From ANON - KARINA on March 16, 2004
    Aaaaaawwww!! Thats sooo KAWI!
    I love it.
    Hey thanks for putting a bit more into the story it came out great!!
    ITS SOOOOOO BEAUTIFUL!!!! ~_~


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  • From ANON - Andy R on December 22, 2003
    I just got around to finishing your story...and I have to agree with Dan there, that was a pretty abrupt ending. It really shows that you wer a r a rush to finish it which is a little upsetting but not unheard of. It happens to a lot of writers. You get a block and rush the ending. It's still good nontheless, but as a favor to your readers, maybe you can go back when you get some inspiration and git ait a proper ending.
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  • From ANON - Dan on December 15, 2003
    Really nice story..cept the end...that was a little...er abrupt and explained nothing about how they got back together...Nothing of the bond. Nothing of how she ever forgave him...To be blunt..I didnt like the ending. Other wise it was a good story.
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  • From ANON - Andy R on November 15, 2003
    Lets see...what to write...oh, I know. How about: THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST F*CKING FICS OF DBZ I'VE EVER READ!!!...ahem...feels good to get that off my chest. I have read a lot of fics for a bunch of different series before, but as far as DBZ is concerned you take the cake (more like the whole bakery). When people usually write about DBZ in a fic it most of the time comes out lame or stale especially concerning the lemon genre of writing. Your certainly a girl thats in touch with her sexuality because the scenes that you write are, for lack of a better word, HOT!~_~ You set the mood quite nicely and know how to execute each scene in the proper way to keep everyone captivated, and despite some of your spelling or grammatical errors, you keep the fluidity of the story going. Besides, it's very easy to get the jist of what your saying anyway.

    Keep on writing...I'll be sure to follow your other work aswell.

    PS: If you don't already have an editor than I would be glad to edit anything you would see fit for me to lend a keyboard at. Just send it via e-mail. I am known to have pretty good grammar and spelling and I thI coI could help you make your fics even better than they already are.
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  • From ANON - KARINA on November 12, 2003
    (sniffs) Thats a great story (sniffs some more) ~_~
    I don't think your chapters aren't nice they are so don't doupt yourself ok? Or else >_
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  • From ANON - KARINA on November 03, 2003
    OOOOOHHHHH MYYY GOOOOOOD!!! Someone please tell me he hasn't been CHEATING ON HER!!!!
    Someone PLEASE!!! ~_~
    Well I don't know for sure so don't answer that. But Please MISSY GIVE THE NEXT CHAPTER.
    I'M GONNA DIE FROM CURIASOTY!!!!
    I DON'T WANT TO DIE!!! I'M TO YOUNG!! ~_~
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