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By : CardDragonBall
  • From ANON - pixy on March 05, 2004
    The Babies don't die.....DO THEY?????
    With so many babies around.....boy, they're gonna be sooooo busy!
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  • From ANON - kitkat on March 05, 2004
    Hey! Sorry i don't review more often. I wrote a review right after chapter nine but it grew old as i couldn't post it right away. Now i still didn't read chapter 13 but i had to leave this review here anyway.

    Chapter 11 and 12 were the BEST chapters ever, i mean it. The way you made goku turn into another level of SSJ because of emotional pain, the way you made he and Chichi talk and "make Goten" (Chichi was so sweet), the way yade ade Vegeta go to Bulma even not really knowing what he was doing... and the way you made Vegeta swallow his pride and give up to Goku. Just GREAT! The right dosis of angst. Very well done.
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  • From ANON - kitkat on March 05, 2004
    Hey! Sorry i don't review more often. I wrote a review right after chapter nine but i grew old as i couldn't post it right away. Now i still didn't read chapter 13 but i had to leave this review here anyway.

    Chapter 11 and 12 were the BEST chapters ever, i mean it. The way you made goku turn into another level of SSJ because of emotional pain, the way you made he and Chichi talk and "make Goten" (Chichi was so sweet), the way you made Vegeta go to Bulma even not really knowing what he was doing... and the way you made Vegeta swallow his pride and give up to Goku. Just GREAT! The right dosis of angst. Very well done.
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  • From ANON - Naruto_Kenshin on March 05, 2004
    Sorry haven't reviewed in awhile -_- been ill, but am now better! And wow the brats are born!!!! One is named Bardock, thats great, I would have never thought that. Vegeta following Goku all around, ahh that was so sweet his protective nature. I love the relationship they have.
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  • From ANON - CrazyGurl on March 05, 2004
    Awwww the babies are born!!!! I also think one should be named Vegeta CARRY ON THE ROYAL NAME!!!! I love that one is named Bardock, that's very sweet.
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on March 05, 2004
    Yay! The babies are here. I understand completely how hard it is to find baby names. I'm gonna have some kids show up in my fic eventually. (But don't tell Mechanical Butterfly its supposed to be a surprise. Well, maybe I shouldn't have posted it here. Hmm. Maybe she doesn't read your reviews. Well...she doesn't know who's gonna be the parents...still some surprise left I suppose...Probaby should not be talking to myself here...He He.) Anyway, I started looking for names early. Luckily, I already have mine, but it will be a while before they show up. Oh and by the way, I loved this chapter. :)
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  • From ANON - Hecate18 on March 05, 2004
    Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while!

    Awwwwwwww!!!! That was so cute, you could just picture in my head.^-^
    There gonna have a handfull Goku and Vegeta cause now there's two more babies on thier way!

    Sorry I'm not much help with baby names, I have difficulty remembering my own name, (well my middle name, I sometimes forget and it's hard to pronounce.) ^_^

    Anyways, this is kinda my review for the last two chaps, I'm so glad Vegeta saw through his pride, it was about time! ^^
    Looking forward to the next chap...
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  • From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on March 05, 2004
    RAD!!! Chappie!!!! Awe those little saiyajin babies, I bet there just too cute, especially the one that looks like Vegeta!!!! You should name one Vegeta!!!! It's only fair, I know they are all royalty, but the one that looks like Vegeta is more royal than the rest.....just kidding!!!!! ^.^
    Vegeta...delivering babies, and Goku pushing thut, ut, now that's a sight to behold!!!
    I just love this ficcie!!!!
    ^.*
    -MB-
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  • From ANON - Ladylupin on March 05, 2004
    Most mpreg stories involve the 'mommy' being cut open. Its ok, but this is so much better! My logic is that if they're pregnant, they can dang well push the thing out like a women! Wonderful chapter! Can't help you with the names though, because I DO think one should be named Vegeta!
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  • From on March 05, 2004
    I'm loving this story. I'm fairly new to the Goku/Vegeta fanfiction but this is one of the best stories I've read. Part of that comes from the fact that I'm a sucker for a well written MPREG story. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on March 04, 2004
    Yay! I get home from class and what do I find? Two brand new chapter waiting for me! I loved those now that all the emotionally deep stuff in coming to the surface. I love that crap! Can't wait for the next part. Wow, you got almost 60 reviews. I am so jealous! ;)
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  • From ANON - Luna on March 04, 2004
    O.O....................Both new chapters.......gods.....*mouth hanging open*Really I have nothing against chichi or bulma and usually prefer to see them get together after goku or vegeta leave them.....That was....*eyes wide and drooling*Continue....
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  • From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on March 04, 2004
    That chapter was so rad, it was radalicious *sobs* That lemon was so sweet. *hugs Vegeta* He finally let Goku be on top, I'm so proud of him!
    ^.* Keep up the awesome chaps!
    -MB-
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  • From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on March 04, 2004
    *kills ChiChi and Bulma* then *smiles* Ahh....I was laughing so hard until I came to the sex part and then I wanted those women to die, and I like Bulma, but at the moment she needed to die!!!! Especially for calling MY OUJI dog sh*t!!!!! But I still love the ficcie. How could they do it to other ppl??? *cries* My poor Veggie never willing to submit....damn the princely pride!!! I know I should have taken your advice and not read the fic in class...uh...but I didn't, so once again my classmates think I'm loopy b/c I'm over here going crazy!

    But what can I say...I'm addicted and I really liked this chapter it had the surprising twist of het sex that I truly never suspected. So now I know you like to keep the reader's on their toes.

    Gohan did make me laugh when you said he stays as far from the house as possible while still being on the planet! *shakes head* That was just too funny!
    ^.*
    -MB-
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  • From ANON - Getarian on March 04, 2004
    I really enjoyed the opening paragraphs of Chapter 11, explaining about Yamcha and Bulma and Goku 'marking his territory' but when I got to this --- "Gohan had wisely decided to stay as far away from the house as he could while still being on the same planet." --- I lost it completely...funny stuff :-)

    What to say about the following scenes, where it all culminated in Vegeta flying off and leaving a very unhappy Goku in the upstairs hallway...one word - Brilliant! Vegeta's "You will not!" was very true to character and I can even see him saying the other stuff as well, even though he would regret it later. I can understand his panic, yet completely sympathise with Goku's despair at his words.

    Canon couples: Hmmm, not a problem for me, but I am glad that it's only to be a one off...Vegeta & Goku are so right together in this fic :-)

    Errr...what did Vegeta mean by Kakarot being something that he could never be...because, no-one is more proud of his Saiyan heritage than Vegeta is...have I misinterpretd the paragraph?

    The lemon was so sweet...Vegeta needed to show Goku what he meant to him and he did it well. I'm deeply touched by this scene.

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