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By : maryl
  • From ANON - Tatsukichi2010 on April 07, 2015
    Such a great story! Love this! Although I prefer KaixRei pairing.. But, I like Bryan in this story! :3
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  • From DemonicWing11051988 on January 13, 2008
    Well your Story is great. I love it!

    I have just a little thing that disturbs me greatly... you see I'm German and your translation of "you look beautiful" to "Sie Schauen schon an" was terrible...I had a hard time to figure out what you meant before I saw the translation at the end of the chapter.
    You see in German the word you has to meanings first if you don't know somebody or you don't kow him/her very well you use "Sie" if the somebody is a friend or like in this fic a soon to be lover you use "du" and well the correct translation of "You look beautiful" would be in your case "Du siehst schoen aus" ( nomally you write the oe in schoen as a ö but i don'T think you have that on your keyboard)

    So that is all I'm complaining about.

    So post more ^^

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  • From ANON - K.C on July 28, 2006
    I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you have to update you havn't in forever. Everybodies getting worried about you girl so hurry up and let us know you're ok. Keep up the great work bye
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  • From ANON - Rachel on February 03, 2006
    This was an awesome fic. Lots of drama and romance and intensity. The only thing I can suggest is to talk about an verbally decsribe Rei's pregnancy more. There really hasn't been much drama with hormones or the fact that he should be getting tired more. It would just make it seem more real. But overall I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - spicyflames on January 05, 2006
    I'm glad to see an update for one of my favourite stories. ^.^ I love how you portrayed Lee and Robert's date. I think it'd be cool if he ended up getting pregnant after that; then they could be together. [squee] Awating your next chapter.
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  • From ANON - LillyLazer666 on December 28, 2005
    YAY! New chappie! Aw...sweet...funny end to that chappie!
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  • From chinohana on December 20, 2005
    ^^ adorable!!! you just have one mistake in german (can't tell in russian, don't speak it) it's better if it was Du siehst schön aus; sorry, i couldn't help it. besides thaton eteeny weeny small listake


    CUUUUUUUUUTE!!! XD
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  • From ANON - Yami Jay on December 19, 2005
    Love the new chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Vampire on December 19, 2005
    YAY! Loved the chapter, and I hope you update soon.At first I thought this was a different story cause it seemed like you weren't going to continue this but when I realized that it was, I had to control myself from jumping up and down. My mother would have thought I was nuts if I did ^^ Anyway love the story.
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on December 19, 2005
    This was great. I love your story. Please stop Kai from dissing Tyson though. I hate it when he always gets it in the neck. And who's he going out with? Please say Spencer. Poor Bryan. Glad he and Tala are away from Boris now. hope Ray doesn't get near too much catnip. Glad you're still writing this story. I thought you'd ditched it. Keep it up. Wanna see the next chapter out soon.
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  • From ANON - Subby on December 19, 2005
    waiii *__*
    ah, i love this story!! and bryanXrei is definitily the best pairing in beyblade!! :D
    can´t wait for the kitten ^^
    oh, one thing, i´m german (so sry for mistakes here) and "you look beautiful" is in german "Du siehst schön aus".
    "Sie schauen schon an" is in english "you look already at" ^^
    but i don´t want to blame you xD this is one of the best stories i´ve ever read!! so keep up work!! =D

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  • From ANON - lunartigergurl on December 11, 2005
    pleeeeeeeez try and update!!! i can't wait much longer and...and i really need to find out how this ends... two more chapters? shoot! i was hoping rei would give birth to the little kitten... wow that sounds weird. pleeeeeez update!!!! i am begging you!
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  • From incubonightmare on November 09, 2005
    loved it can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - rdavymac on October 09, 2005
    I love this fic!! I wanna see Rei's and Bryan's kitten. ^.^ Going public in the last chapter was really gutsy!
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  • From ANON - sirhcnotlih on June 20, 2005
    I got 2 questions.

    1.When is he gonna have the baby? And what about Lee and the Dinner Date?

    2.Could you make Marian commit suicide? Please?

    5 out of 5!
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