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Reviews for Past, Present and Future

By : StormPrincesa
  • From ANON - Setsu on July 08, 2005
    COOL! I love this so far! Yuki is soooo cool! I would really like to see her with Wufei ^.^ yup. Trowa/Qautra and Heero/Duo Yuki/Wufei I see all the other pilots getting close to her and every one having a bod. SO cool! But things are happening a lil fast don't you think? I mean she just shows up and right away they trust her? Oh well loving it so far yay! Who are the people fallowing them? Will their be a war? Does she have a gundam? Whats it called? I like ArcAngel you know how Heero's is Wing Zero and wouldn't it be cool to have another one with wings? The are twins after all ^.^ So are all the G boy's with the Preventers? Will Yuki meet Sally Po and Noin? Oh I can't wait for that meeting. And will Yuki and Duo become good friends? Like helping play jokes on people? Oh so many questions hope you planed for this to be long! But I would really like to see those pairings and how they will play out. Arigato! Ja ne till next chap!
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  • From ANON - bright anarchy on January 20, 2005
    You need to work on the realism or go completely unreal and be blatent with magic, encouraging suspension of disbelief. Edit your work or get it beta'd. Balance your heroine's super ablities with limitations. Preferably, those limitations should not be only 'oh poor me' angst.

    The writing is fairly easy to read. That's good. You seem to be doing a good job with the G-boy's characterizations.
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