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Reviews for Thin Lines

By : SelenityJade
  • From rychefan on September 04, 2012
    love it just love it hope you will update again sometime
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  • From Sunburst on January 14, 2010
    Very nice wrap-up nevertheless, I stayed up to read all of this despite being sick, and for now I will consider this my ending (which wouldn't be so bad). Ja ne!
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  • From Sunburst on January 14, 2010
    Bulma at times can be entirely too whiny in this, but I guess this is all before Trunks and she grows up a bit *cringe*
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  • From Sunburst on January 14, 2010
    I headed the OOC warning but *raises eyebrow* Anyway, I guess a little sweetness never hurt nobody :)
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  • From Sunburst on January 14, 2010
    *rolls eyes* I hope Bulma isn't always going to be such a wimp in the bedroom. Poor Veggie. Or perhaps I'm just a ruffian.
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  • From Sunburst on January 14, 2010
    Okay, all was forgiven by the time I finished the chapter. It was pretty sweet *embarrassed smile*
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  • From Sunburst on January 14, 2010
    I might even hate her for the rest of the store *glares* Hmm...
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  • From Sunburst on January 14, 2010
    Before I even forget, didn't finish the chapter yet, but I don't think Bulma would be that psychotic and mean...I hated her in this chapter.
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  • From Sunburst on January 14, 2010
    I really loved this chapter. This is definitely the man he would show Bulma.
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  • From Sunburst on January 14, 2010
    Haha, he was a tad too soft, but I enjoyed this nevertheless
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  • From Sunburst on January 13, 2010
    I think you've struck one of the best balances in Vegeta's personality I've seen. This seems way more canon. So many make him way too harsh. This is more true to the Japanese Vegeta.
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  • From Sunburst on January 13, 2010
    Lol I didn't mind this chapter in the least. You have a great writing style!
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  • From Sunburst on January 13, 2010
    AHAHAHA! I LOVE THIS! TOO MUCH FUNNY IN HERE:

    "She had provided for him, and her mother had doted on him, much to his annoyance. That Onna's mother is a complete moron. I am surprised she lived long enough to birth a child, let alone one as intelligent as the Onna."

    "He groaned. Damn fantasies. He glared as he reacted and attempted to think about Kakarotto and his harpy of a mate, Furiza destroying his planet, Zarbon's ugly transformation, and felt himself calm."

    "He supposed it was ironic. He wanted the damn weak Onna. He wanted to talk with her and yell at her, protect her and hate her, caress her and kill her. Damn her!"
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  • From ANON - red102277 on January 25, 2009
    this is the first story i have read with this type of story line . . . and i really like it. Honestly i have like ALL of your stories i have read so far.
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  • From ANON - kris on September 08, 2006
    please, please, update, this has been my favorite story for the longest time. I really like the way you potray the character b/c the perfectly accurate!!!
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