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Reviews for True Pain

By : SelenityJade
  • From gokusgirl on May 19, 2008
    Wow!

    You know I'm sure I've read this story some time before. I was truly moved by your A/N on your profile page-- you're right you know about reviews and all. Sometimes people do just want to hear "good work update soon" and stay concerned about gaining reviews with no substance at all. They [reviews] don't give you a shred of anything that has to do with your story. Being a writer myself I feel that I want people to tell me if my stories suck or need improvement. I never get any of that! And I was rather disheartened about it has zapped my creative juices for a while. I feel as a writer I'm still at this point that others has passed and went far and beyond their abilities, (like yourself) and I don't want to create anymore works that don't get taken seriously or given any insight on how I can make it better. I even had one talented author (who will remain nameless) tell me in an email that she's read one of my stories over 15+ times, and I know that is a lie. It's crap. I just wished I could get the truth out of people instead of glossed over lies.

    Okayyyy... sorry about that. But back to your wonderful story! I'm sorry it's unfinished; do you intend to finish it? Or do you have it posted somewhere else (ff.net or MM.org)? Well no bother...I'm off to seek it out. Much luck and success to you, and I hope you haven't stopped writing. You have some awesome talent and it would be a huge shame. Take care!

    ~gokusgirl

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  • From ANON - xxdevilnightmarexx on September 06, 2004
    plz update soon
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  • From ANON - Gitona on April 04, 2004
    Hiya!!!OHH MY!!!I!!!IM CRYING!SERIOUSLY I AM CRYING!!Its jus soooo beautiful!I mean I love the fact that youre making i tsooo in a way romantic!!OO PLEASE PLEASE EMAIL ME WHEN U UPDATE!!I HAVE OT KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!
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  • From ANON - maria on April 03, 2004
    i like the story it's good.full of emotions .can't wait until the next chapter..
    and can you please ask mia if she is going to finish A LIGHT IN THE DARKNESS... please let her know that i'm waiting for the ending....
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 02, 2004
    I so enjoy reading your stories. The Bulma Vejita interactions you write are priceless :)
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  • From ANON - szara on April 02, 2004
    Donīt you dare get a life, I know what happens then; you get a hobby and the fic would be abondoned. Some 300 readers would be very angry with you if you did that. So do us all a favor and update fast, I loved your story so far. I donīt care if there will be a lemon (ever) as long as V&B stay canon.
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  • From ANON - Shiro Ryu on March 31, 2004
    Yeh! You updated so soon! Great chapters! I also love your last disclaimer "...Bite Me". LOL ^__^! Though I would think it would be better to be bitten by Vegeta than a nasty shark toothed lawyer,ne?
    Hmm that would be a funny fic "Vegeta vs Shark Toothed Lawyers". Maybe not. ^__^
    Thank you for all your hard work!
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