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Reviews for Foresaken you, Please stay...

By : Madhatter
  • From maegerakawaii on January 02, 2009
    I think I might cry if this doesn't have a happy ending. I really enjoy reading this. Please keep going. I'm just scared that maybe Duo lost the baby from being beaten so badly. That would be so sad. Anyway, can't wait for the next update. Ciao.
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  • From ANON - tyleet88 on August 27, 2005
    hey vaction is over :D...update plz...will Heero find Duo in time..Will duo fade away..? what happens update plz
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  • From ANON - RedMirage on August 17, 2004
    I wondered how many times I have reread this wonderful story... It's so unique and instinsting to read. Rather sad too. Anyway, I've noticed that it have been months since you updated and I really hope you will continue writing. Not just this fic but also all of your other fics... Hope I can see an update in near future!
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  • From ANON - priscel on April 23, 2004
    hey cool story I hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - kinhoshi76 on April 20, 2004
    girl you got to wrtie more pleaese

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  • From ANON - qualmi-chan on April 14, 2004
    What a great story!! I hate cliffhangers!! Continue soon!!
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  • From ANON - vampireshinigami on April 07, 2004
    NOO! clif hanger! Keep going plz?! This story is great!
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  • From ANON - SilverYaoi on April 06, 2004
    Hi! I love this fic, I truly do! Please update soon!
    s. Is. I saw that you don't know what a beta reader is. A beta reader reeds your fic before you post it, checking for grammar errors and such. It really pays of in the end!

    Good luck with the fic!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 06, 2004
    this is a very unique and interesting story...i hope the ending is a happy one...i'll keep my fingers crossed!!!
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  • From ANON - neoora on April 06, 2004
    ack! what next why must i wait until the great wonderful chippy to come out WWWWWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYY:(

    o well what going to happen next o i hope the baby is ok :I
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  • From ANON - aspara on April 05, 2004
    It's a cool story, but I suggest a beta reader. There are some grammatical errors as well as other stuff that need to be fixed.
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  • From ANON - neoora on April 01, 2004
    All i can say is WOW WOW WOW that was soooooo grreat when is the next chippy coming out i just can't wait to see what happen next :)

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  • From ANON - leemax^_^ on April 01, 2004
    This is a very good story. I am hoping that you will update more like today or tomarrow. Really good.
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  • From ANON - CrimsonSeraph on April 01, 2004
    now why would quatre pass out? is it because he is afraid of what may happen if those two see each other naked, or the fact that heero may hurt duo? also, having a mute duo seems a little weird. do u plan on having him get his voice back any time soon? overall, i've always loved reading master and slave fics since so much can happen. i can't wait to see your next update.
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  • From ANON - TheGaffler on April 01, 2004
    This is a very interesting AU story. Please by all means continue.
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