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By : ArchNemesis
  • From ANON - Lavonya on January 22, 2014
    I really like your story!!!
    Is Bardock's mate Turles?
    The powers that Vegeta Ouji has, is it Telekinesis?
    Do you know when you will update this? Or is this on Hiatus?
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  • From Yaoi_Angel on June 06, 2013
    this is a great story. it should have bee finished.
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  • From Zofo on November 10, 2008
    Glad they got their revenge on the Bateau.

    Worried Vegeta is still weak, especially with Frieza around and Zarbon having his eye on him. Somehow I don't think Zarbon will be put off by Vegeta being mated.

    Ohhh, who is the father? Very intriguing. Turles? Hmm, doesn't seem powerful enough. I'm thinking Brolli as it's AU and you can change the time sequence. If he is it may explain Kakarot being SS.

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  • From LittleMustardSeed on November 08, 2008
    BARDOCK HAS A MATE?!?!?!?!?! OMG! i can't WAIT to find out who it is, please update again soon and tell us all! XD
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  • From LittleMustardSeed on January 14, 2008
    ooooh...telikenetic powers...ooooh, aahhh
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  • From Zofo on January 10, 2008
    Thank you for answering my questions, you're a star.

    What an exciting chapter! I shudder to think what they wanted with Kakarot. About Vegeta, I think the act of protecting his mate, which he seemed to do automatically, over-stretched Vegeta's mind and body when it hadn't been prepared or trained for it, so he's suffering a kind of burn-out. How long will he take to recover as it looks like time is running out, can he be trained in time, and can he and Kakarot stand up to Frieza yet?

    As for the teaser for the next chapter that really has me intriqued. Has Vegeta gone bad or has someone else got their grubby little mitts on Kakarot?
    xxx
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  • From zombiebait86 on December 27, 2007

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  • From LittleMustardSeed on December 24, 2007
    how can i not have read this story before? its fab! keep it up =]
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  • From Zofo on December 23, 2007
    Great story. Interesting that you are portraying the Androids and Humans as Saiyans.

    I had a little tear in my eye when they lost the baby. So sad, especially when they didn't know Kakarot was pregnant.

    Loads of questions.....How did Seventeen escape, I thought they arrested him at the tournament? What special training does Vegeta need to do? Who wants Kararot and who are the people of Bateau? Will the Nameks make an appearance? Will Frieza try to destroy the planet?

    Looking forward to the next chapter.
    xxx
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  • From ANON - Dark~kakarot on October 22, 2006
    Omg...*cries* That was horrible..that guy should gets what coming to him...Lol you ddi well i love it please make another chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Jade on February 12, 2006
    Please keep on writing. I really want to know what will happen next.
    Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Macha on February 02, 2006
    YAY... An update! I am glad Kakarott pulled the win off, I was affraid he wasn't going to for a moment. Stupdi Juunana, I hope Vegeta does get his head on a platter.


    I wish this tournament hadn't been necessary. Then K & V would still have their baby. Stupid old farts!


    Update soon please!
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  • From ANON - Macha on January 10, 2006
    Glad to hear this story hasn't been left at the way side. :) Just know I'll be waiting for an update.
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  • From ANON - kinhoshi76 on October 05, 2005
    please sent more conquered archnemesis please.........wow i can't i begged an author as much as i have begged you !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sorry the story just that good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Xero Sky on September 13, 2005
    Your ideas are interesting. I'm a little confused by a couple of things, but perhaps they'll come clear in future chapters. You really need a beta reader, though, both for grammar and consistency.
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