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Reviews for Never Before

By : CardDragonBall
  • From ANON - stella on April 18, 2004
    omg, that was incredible. please write more.i'm hooked, it is getting very hot in this room. hope u update soon.
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  • From ANON - Getarian on April 18, 2004
    Very pleased to see another chapter up. :-)

    You'll have to forgive my rather crappy reviews this night, but I've been fighting a three day old headache, which has only had breaks as long as the panadol allowed and now my eyes are beginning to ache, and my thought processes are a bit frayed.

    But I really wanted to review this as well as your others, because I love your stuff so much.

    I really loved the idea that Vegeta stayed up and watched Bulma sleeping after they coupled. The image was so wonderfully presented. I also loved Vegeta's thoughts as he realised that he was not going to be able to walk away from this, untouched by it all.

    Unbelievable, I don't know how you do it, but I found the shower scene with Vegeta to be very erotic...and he was masturbating, but in the most sensual manner possible...incredible :-)

    Loved Bulma's thoughts as she realised that Vegeta a bra breast man. Gotta love manipulative Bulma :-)

    Enjoyed her thoughts about Goku staring at her breasts and he didn't even realise he was doing it. Loved the image I got of Goku grinning, scratching the of of his head and staring point blank at her breasts...LOL!

    Truly loved the lemon! I deeply love the way you have these two interacting with each other. I would have loved to have seen this on the show. Considering that this side to them was never shown, you have extrapolated the whey hey would possibly be with each other, very well in my opinion.

    Loved this alot! Definitely hoping for more :-)

    Really enjoyed the end disalogue :-)
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  • From Pixelgoddess on April 18, 2004
    Vegeta. He who kills first, kills more and then after everyone was dust decides that no questions needed to be asked.

    That is a classic, perfect line and I love it.

    I'm not a fan of het myself, but damn, this was good. I never cease to be amazed at how much you can keep everyone so much in character. (And I promise to review more of your work - you write so much it is overwhelming, but I haven't read a thing of yours I don't like.)
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  • From ANON - Caralin Fury on April 16, 2004
    Awesome. I love your writing style. It is unique, descriptive and very honest. I like a good BV story and this is one of the very better ones I have read in a long while.
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  • From ANON - star_of_chaos on April 16, 2004
    Not bad for your first het fic. Loved the line about Chi chi ;-)
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on April 16, 2004
    Owww....that was kinky. I liked that one. It doesn't really have to be a one shot does it? *Pouts and tries to look pityful* Aww, come on you know you want to write more. Think of the challenge! You could be the one the writes the best Bulma and Vegeta get togther ever. I've looked around I don't think that it will be that hard. j/k...Please?
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  • From ANON - Shiro Ryu on April 16, 2004
    Mmmmm ... don't think you have any problems with het. lemons. That was terrific! If you did decide to do a Bulma/Vegeta fic with a plot, I would definitely read it. So anyway, that was fun, thank you.
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  • From ANON - Bulma-san on April 16, 2004
    Well done and you are gonna write more.
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