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Reviews for Ancient History: The Forgotten Past of the Saiyans

By : cueball2
  • From ANON - Card on October 13, 2004
    *whimper* does this mean they're all going to Earth (chapter 15)? ...must go find out now.
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  • From ANON - Card on October 13, 2004
    I agree with the people staring at Goku strangely. I would definitely need a moment or two to get used to the new outfit. *is worried*

    Next chappie now!~~
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  • From ANON - Card on October 13, 2004
    Gasp! Bardock?

    ...Bardock?!

    *runs away to read*
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  • From ANON - yyy on September 27, 2004
    chapter 14

    wow, wonderful addition! The girls are back, and Vegeta got Bra's picture! ^__^ Lucky for Bra The others had arrive. I can't wait til you update! It will be awsome to see the family reunion. So many things are gonna happen!!! What will the Vegeta and Gokuu's fathers say to their sons after all these years? How will trunk, Gohan and Goten be affected by their grandfather showing up? This is gonna drive me crazy...the wait...to find out what will happen.. (and what will happen with Bra and Pan and the two guys they love too)

    I really love your work, you have great style in your writing, and your fic got everything, mystery, action, romance....etc. Please write more soon. I will wait patiently.

    Sincerely, your fan YYY
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  • From ANON - Midnight Dreams on September 24, 2004
    this is quite interesting, different but interesting.
    what i really don't get is Chi chi? she knows Goku loves Vegeta right? but she's been having an affair? as well and also the fact they have died and the marriage thing non-exists.
    I really don't get why she started crying and saying Goku broke up with her, when they clearly agreed, there was no love, there was no marriage.
    i have to admit, i find it funny when chi chi dies O.o
    But then i also love the new twists you have going in your story, hee hee with Goku turning out to be a prince.
    Well please e-mail me when you update...and also if you can or anyone explain the whole Chi chi thing...because i am clearly confused ?_?
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  • From ANON - Card on August 28, 2004
    ...Finally, I get off my lazy bum (or on it really) to read this chappie.

    Bardock? *squeal* I love Bardock and King Vegeta and Claiming and it's all so great! *more squealing* Poor King Vegeta, they didn't tell him that his son was alive? weirdo.

    Now, lets go back to the Saiyans and see how they are doing. Bra, Pan? Okay...*whimper* what about the boy saiyans?

    Card
    (who is waiting for more.)
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  • From ANON - chayron on July 10, 2004
    So, Goku/Kakarot is a prince..? Hmm...that's a good one ;) That was hilarious when Vegeta leapt on Appuru! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - chayron on July 10, 2004
    Poor Goku! But when Vegeta is besides him it can't be very bad, can it? I loved this chapter!
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  • From ANON - chayron on July 10, 2004
    Yeah, that's a very good idea with that "until death do you part". I liked that very much ;)
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  • From ANON - chayron on July 10, 2004
    I liked the chapter. Cha! Bulma will teach the prince some manners. Women power! Who I am kidding...if she didn't manage to do that in all these years...
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  • From ANON - Card on June 28, 2004
    *growl*

    Erg! Idiot site.

    As for chapchapter. That was just mean to leave it there with me wantio kno know more! Waaaah! *sob * *sniffle * But at least there is that little bit o'preview at the end. *sniffle * Still not as good as a whole new chapter.

    Oh, especially good was the descriptions of the books. I loved the way you described the scenes on the covers.

    (Sorry for noviewviewing earlier, and thank you for telling me about the update.)

    Card!~
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  • From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on June 19, 2004
    That was a great 2 chapters!
    I loved the whole scene with the book kocking Goku out, thought that was described wonderfully.
    I am very curious to know what Goku knows that Vegeta doesn't.
    This fic is so great. And Vegeta punching Appuru in the gut was funny.
    So now the Prince is in heat...this should prove to be very interesting.
    And I think you should keep the previews at the end of the chaps I thiney aey are rad.
    Anywho I am loving the fic.
    ^.*
    -MB-
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  • From ANON - Twilight-Abyss on June 14, 2004
    Ok..I started chapter 1 at a little after 2am or so. It's almost 4 am now and I'm caught up to your most recent chapter. I just couldn't stop reading. It's very well written and very imaginitive. Love the Sugar high chapters...thwerewere too funny. I felt a little guilty for laughing at the crash of flight 242. All I could think was, "Bye Bye Chichi," -insert explosion sound effects here- As for your preview for the next chapter, it's a bit like torture. Teasing me with tidbits for the next chapter and now I have to wait? *cries* haha...that's ok though, because when the next chapter does come I will only be more enthusiastic to read it. Keep the previews I say. Update soon!

    ~Kira~
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  • From ANON - Card on June 11, 2004
    Ah!~ No fair you just tease like that. *glrare* No, its good. I liked the little heads up on the next chappie. Gives me something specific to look forward too.

    Now. I was wondering who (or what) Tony was. Good to know. ;) I love that the ship is named Solaris. *nods * Ah, but what is the cycle? What is the node? WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN?!

    *grabs nearby person and starts shaking them for answers *

    *cough* No. Really. I can wait.

    Oh, almost forgot about the Bra thing. Goodness. Tossing people in bodies of water. Getting letters and pictures. Whats a saiyan to do? Or think? Hope it works out for her.

    Card!~
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on June 11, 2004
    I have been slacking on my reading and reviewing...I know. But you have been busy while I was away. Bra in the fic. I love her she reminds me so much of Bulma. Poor...*cough*...Chichi...uh yeah. Anyway, so Goku is after Vegeta, eh? I hope he gets him. I love the details...details are gat kat keeping me hooked. I will be waiting for more. I promise to review.
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