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By : Agent182
  • From ANON - Webtester01 on August 23, 2005
    I love the way you present the thoughts of each character.

    The mystery of this story gets more and more intense as I read it. Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Me on August 22, 2005
    I dunno what's more fun to red, your story ir the review you got from Lady Blue... O.O
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  • From ANON - Noel on July 12, 2005
    Girl Please write some more of this story it tis one of my Favorites. It saddens me that you haven't written any more. *CRYS* I NEED SOMETHING TO FILL THESE DAYS OF MONOTONY!!!!!!!!!! Oh dude and when I left my number It is there to be used. Don't think twice of calling it. I may not answer when it rings but I am super good at getting back to calls!
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  • From ANON - Sassy on June 25, 2005
    Whats going on this is werid update if u will
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  • From ANON - Amy on November 26, 2004
    ok when u r going to update ive been waiting for forever i luv ur story so please updtae soon
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  • From on September 06, 2004
    Wow. Just, wow. This was probably the most origninal fiction I've read in a long time. I went searchior aor a story to skim through tonight, and I stumbled on this peice of work. I quickly realized this isn't a story one can just "skin through". Though a few typo's confused me at times, I was very impressed with this (Hence why I'm taking the time to review). I'm compelled. At this point though, I have no clue what-so-ever as to where you might be going with all this. Of course, that's what makes it all worth the while. You have a very good story here. I hope you continue it soon.
    ~AngelKitty
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  • From ANON - ssj 5000 on September 01, 2004
    hey i love your story i wish for u to keep it up and finish this story
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  • From ANON - Noel on August 31, 2004
    Ok I was bord so I just like Clicked on a story and I was like hmmm this seems interesting...I read it and it wasn't until I got to the bottom of the first page that I relized that this was your story!!! I like it its all like eerrie and such. I am really enjoying it I hope you update soonly. It would be a cryin shame ifin ya don't.

    Noel
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  • From ANON - Dbz lover on August 24, 2004
    hi i love the stories so far i cant wait for you to finish it please be soon it is so good
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  • From ANON - macha on August 23, 2004
    I think the only reasegetegeta isn't allowed to talk wit Goku is because they are the only ones in that sick world to not believe it. Whether or not they are dellusional about their belief has yet to be seen.

    The part that had me concerned is when Chichi suddenly went to choke the Prince. Hmmm, they would save him from destroying himself, but nott a t a finger if the damage was inflicted by someone else? I am thinking the goal in this, if it is a strange consperacey, isn't death then. Otherwise they would have let him go with the blood down the drain. What would the benefit be if 'they' did convence Vegeta he was insane then?
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  • From ANON - Lady Blue on August 10, 2004
    Oh my God. I don't want to sound insane or something, but what you write... it deeply frightens me, to the point where I'm curled up in a ball, whimpering, but unable to stop reading, with some sick fascination forcing me to come back and read, and re-read. It's terrifying. And I don't know why. Normally I'm fine with insanity fics, with blood and gore, and especially with the hurt-comfort part of a lot of G/V fics. But... I don't know... I don't knowmoremore. It's become so warped. I even have my own ideas, of things equally disturbing, which make me sick to my stomach; thoughts of a madman! Your writing- when you have a tragic ending, in your fics, it does something to me, and I cry openly. I shouldn't be this affected by it. It's weak of me. I don't understand...
    I'm sorry if I seem crazy. But I feel like I've lost something. I don't know what it was- there's no way it could be innocence, I think- but whatever I lost, I don't know if I want to have it back. Inside of me, deep inside of me, there's something trying to break free. And I am scared to let it out. What if I'm crazy? I don't even know if I don't want to be crazy anymore. It m me me quiver with fear to read things you write, because I can imagine, perfectly, doing the exact same things myself, no matter how horrifying or bloody.
    Gods, I sound disturbed.
    I even fear you. Sometimes I doubt your very existence; I imagine that some supernatural thing, some god is turning this writing out. It is something horrible to me, because it is true.
    I am desperate to understand you. I wonder if you intended to have this effect on your readers, and if your intent was malicious, or if you just wanted to catch up the readers in an amusing idea. I'd be relieved and honored if you e-mailed me. Sorry to waste your time on this review.
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  • From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on May 16, 2004
    Very glad you updated!

    All these people were crazy! Even his damn doctor- that happened to look like Kakkarot- no- EXACTLY like him! He just wanted to pull his hair and scream.--aww poor Vegeta. Yeah those people are crazy. I am slighlty afraid of them and intrigued (sp?)

    A gasp came from his doctor and he seemed as if he woke from some strange nightmare--*is scared* What the heck is his problem?!?!?!?!

    "Mister B-Vegeta…? It’s time... time for you to go back to your… your room…" --*gasp* He practically said Vegeta!!! *is very suspicous*

    He could barely see Kakkarot but he did manage to see his eyes were glazed over, tears fell from them and drool was hanging from his parted lips. --O_O!!!! *is very freaked out hiding in closet* I thought Kakarott was the one in power and even he seems to be losiis mis marbles or gaining his marbles...not sure...

    And Bulma...she is the new doctor *gasp*..WHAT IS GOING ON!!!!!

    UGH!!!!!! Why did you stop there!!!! *throws computer* I am so confused!!! What is going on! I need to know!!!!

    Lmao..stripping for the computer eh...I won't ask but I am sure Ryan knows alll about that....^.~

    Please update soon..or else...
    look at me threatening the person who created Finch...*sighs* I really should watch who I threaten...
    how about this..
    Please update soon and I will give you...Ryan! Yeah I will wrap him up and send him to you via federal express!!!!!

    ^.*
    -MB-

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  • From ANON - jaygoose on May 16, 2004
    Oww...what a loverly twist. But I must know...what the hell is going on. What the hell was ChiChikingking about. The chapter was short but I agree I don't think my poor brain could have taken anymore. *sigh* so I'll just wait...patiently...*growls*
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  • From ANON - macha on May 16, 2004
    Okay, so something is terribley WRONG, and who ever is responsible(in the fic of course) doesn't have all of the bugs figured out. I don't think that it was planned for Goku to realize that he wasn't a doctor and to go all drooly.

    So, we got a clue, I am guessing, about the humming noise. I certainly don't know what the noise has to do with what, but I suppose that will be explained later.

    I'm still disturbed by this fic, and loving every moment of it!
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  • From ANON - hudine on May 05, 2004
    you know this story really messes up my mined. Has me wondering what is real. And Goku with needles? *cringes*

    -Hudine-

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