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Reviews for Best Birthday Present Ever

By : stealthalchemist
  • From ANON - . on July 08, 2006
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  • From ANON - Amanda Fields on February 03, 2006
    God,that was HOT!!! It is so hard to find a good elricest fanfiction. This fanfiction is definitly the best I have ever read before,and I have read some really great ones!
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  • From ANON - The Ice Alchmist on October 23, 2005
    Funny.
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  • From ANON - hakkzaw tha klown on July 20, 2005
    TOO MUCH JAPANESE!....BUT FRIGGIN HAWT REGARDLESS! I DO NOT SPEAK JAPANESE! I KNOW SHIT LIKE NIISAN AND SOME OTHERS BUT DAMN YOU USED ALOT! DAMN! DEEEEEEEEEEMN! great story though
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on May 01, 2005
    Very cute!!! Keep up the good work!!!
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  • From on March 05, 2005
    Nicely done.
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  • From ANON - StapleKitten on January 17, 2005
    Tee hee that was cute. You defintaly made it sound like it was their first time. Keep up the fun! *Peace*Love*Happiness*
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  • From ANON - Can\'t sign in cause I bite on January 11, 2005
    Me likey. I mean... uh *Wipes drool from mouth*Its very good! Write more, or I might have to cry! You wouldn't want a defenseless girl (yeah, I'm a guy so what?) to cry now would you?
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  • From ANON - Gin (too lazy to sign in) on January 06, 2005
    Gin: *is too busy drooling to write a review*
    Jin: *walks in* Hey Gin! What're you...*starts drooling too*
    White Wolf: *pokes head in doorway* Well, they seem to like it. So do I, but I read it once before so I'm not drooling right now. I did the first time, though. Anyway, hope you write more! Even if it isn't this pairing or this fandom, I think you're an awsome author. *rereads story and starts drooling*
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  • From ANON - ??? on December 10, 2004
    please make another story like this or just write more chapters its very good
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  • From ANON - alchemy fan on December 03, 2004
    this is great i very very strongly suggest making a sequel
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  • From ANON - Yamilisa on November 03, 2004
    My, that was awesome. Seriy! Yy! Yeah, so it's incest. Big deal, they shouldn't have made them so hot ^_~.
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  • From ANON - Chibi Ron Weasley on August 27, 2004
    Hey dude, great idea for a story. I think I'd like that for a birthday present~~!! ^^
    Some of your grammar was off, but it's nothing you can't work at. Some words were repeated more than needed in upleuple of sentances. Just use a thesaurus or something and it should take care of it.
    Anyway, I love Ed and Al... especially when Al gets to be on top... so cute! X3
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  • From ANON - Too Lazy To Sign In on August 06, 2004
    Man, is it getting uncomfortably hot in here or what? The story? ....it was HOT. ^_^ Is there any chance we can expect more?
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