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Reviews for Fathoming Love

By : Camaro
  • From ANON - Deexx on September 20, 2013
    I hope somehow you see this and continue to write. This story was amazing to say the least. I thrived off the dark and depressing aura this story evoked. I was never a fan of the Zarbon/Vegeta love tie, however you brought it to life in a way I could never imagine. The love shared between them, I love the way you wrote with such passion. You made everything believable. Although the story kind of slowed for me after Vegeta met Bulma it was still fantastic, and in my honest opinion the best story ive ever read. Please continue.
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  • From ANON - Jenna on January 14, 2011
    I know it's been a while since the last update, but I hope there's going to be more. I've been reading this story since it came out over 6 years ago, so I'm more than willing to wait :].
    This piece is truly brilliant. I mean abso-fucking-lutely fantastic! Your characterization has always been damn-near flawless in that you take a seemingly two-dimensional character and make them so much more real to the audience (Strong Heart actually had me on the edge of my office chair yelling at the monitor). You've created intricate crazy beautiful stories around things I had never considered. I really hope you write novels now or someday soon, because you would be a huge freaking success, luv.

    Here's to you.
    Sincerely
    ~Jen
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  • From ANON - Duresce on June 27, 2010
    This is a deep and moving story with so much more going in Vegeta's head than I would imagine. There are not enough words to express my appreciation of your time and effort that have been put into this story.
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  • From ANON - SaiyanGal on December 04, 2009
    Oh GOD it took me forever to find this story. Glad to see that it has been updated since I last read it. I've got my fingers crossed that you'll continue writing. :)
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  • From ANON - Unbeliever on October 05, 2009
    Wow. This is, by far, one of the best pieces of writing I have read on any Fanfiction site. Fantastic work, I am really looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From Robyn on September 15, 2009
    O.o I missed this update! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!! What can I say? I don't go to the het section much.

    Vegeta breaking up with Bulma like that - it's so like him at that point in his life! Well written, of course. :P

    Ooooooo, I'm having a hard time believing the alien Vegeta saw was really Zarbon. I guess I'll have to wait/hope you update this story to find out!
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  • From ANON - Apolonia on March 25, 2009
    I told you before your story is amazing, now I'm reconfirming it. I'm so glad you have updated! I really am! So... we are now going to see how great Vegeta became a Super Saiyajin... but is that Zarbon for real? or just a hallucination? OMG! I'm so glad you have come back, I do thank you so much for uploading this chapter... this one, though short, has been great! poor little Bulma... I still want to know why Veggie killed her.
    Thanks again, thank you thank you thank you thank you!
    I love your story, please... please don't abandon us!!!!!!!! ^^

    Looking forward to read you soon!
    Tamy
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  • From ANON - Caprice on September 01, 2008
    Pffffffft I had no idea this was a work in progress so you can just imagine my face when I reached the end of chapter 36 (still totally convinced that the story was complete, for some reason) and then I was like, Uh... is that it? Haha. Wait, wait, whatever happened to Tazial and baby Trunks, and how and why did Vegeta kill her again? These were all thoughts running through my head. And then I was like, duuh, the thing is obviously not complete. It was sort of funny to tell you the truth.

    Anyway... that slightly comedic incident aside, I just have to ask, and forgive me for probably being the gazillionth person who does so: Is this story discontinued or are you still going to update it? I suppose it goes without saying that it would be a great pity if it was left as it is, there are so so many ends untied, basically the whole thing is completely open.

    I gotta tell you Camaro, you are one of the authors I respect the most in the fandom (as evidenced by my other reviews for your stories), and this story is definitely a very good one. I mean, the style is great, you write exceptionally well, we all know that. I know you don't like concrit (and that's your prerrogative), so I won't go all concrit on you or any of that shit. I will just leave it as saying that I appreciate this story very much, that I think it deserves to be appreciated within the fandom and receive a honorable mention. It's bleak, tremendously, insanely bleak, bleak bleak, like a modernist literary approach (despair and existentialism on a double dose) but I believe that is not criticism, it's merely GENRE, and what you are trying to do anyway.

    So having said that, if you have it in you to conclude it, I would love to see what you do to them...

    Much love to you,
    Caprice
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  • From ANON - Hello Jenny on February 09, 2008
    I wrote you an e-mail that was the extent of my review, although I had to change my e-mail address since then, you now have to add 79 right before the @ to reach me....anyway I just wanted to tell you I really can't wait untill you add more to this story (I hope you are planning to), although I understand such a complex story is ALOT of work, and you have inspired me to go check out your "Monster"...whatever the subject matter, I am sure it is a fantastic story and I will be up all night trying to finish it....keep up the good work and if you ever go professional (I think you could ::kisses ass:: lol) let us all know!
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  • From ANON - Apolonia on February 04, 2008
    Well... I think I spent like 2 whole days finishing your story... It's incredible, you are a genius. Man, this story is angsty, sick, twisted, lovely, pervert, and amazing. You are increbile, I hope to read like one thousand chaptes more of this, and well, read why Vegeta finally killed Bulma. Excelent story!!! keep going, because I'm so eager to keep reading.

    Apolonia (tamilach @ gmail.com)
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  • From LaRieaux on November 03, 2007
    Hey there, it's LaRieaux. How have you been doing? Haven't talked to you in a really long time. Send me an email when you get the chance, k? Same one as before, larieaux@aim.com.
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  • From LaRieaux on November 03, 2007
    Hey there, it's LaRieaux. How have you been doing? Haven't talked to you in a really long time. Send me an email when you get the chance, k? Same one as before, larieaux@aim.com.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 28, 2007
    Quoting Keanu Reeves...

    Whoa!

    This is wonderful! Though I never could guess I'd be laughing so much with one of your stories. Well, it's mostly the parts with Bulma and Vegeta's little fights, but the scene at the Irish pub was also priceless. And also Bulma's mom inquiring about Vegeta at the bathroom. The end of chapter 35 was too good for words. Didn't realize it was a work in progress. Are you still updating? I hope you are.
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  • From oneswish on October 13, 2007
    holy cow!

    i fricken love this fic! the style, the way u personafi vegeta.. everything. it makes my day when u update.

    this is by far the greatest vegeta fic i have ever read.. its so different. it makes u think in between the lines of the whole story.

    so will bulma ever have a kid? er trunks? or this is kinda like ur time line?

    but all in all i love it. i have been reading it for a very very long time..

    dont ever change!

    thank u for the update!!
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  • From ANON - Macha on October 13, 2007
    Ouch...all of that triumph, only to have it come crashing down like that. *shakes head*

    Reading this chapter was like running a mile while also being on a roller coaster. @.@ Dear kami, what else are you going to put Vegeta and Bulma through?


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