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By : jaygoose
  • From ANON - Macha on December 13, 2004
    Ah, and a very nice bang it was too. Radditz is such a perv. Poor confused Android Cell.

    Breaking up the love fest, what's that all about? j/k

    I am very happy that you finished your side story to HoK, and a good story it was too. Congradualtions.
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  • From ANON - Yuurei on November 25, 2004
    Wow. Stunned me a bit with Raditz popping back in. Very nice. Update again soon, please.
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  • From ANON - Macha on November 21, 2004
    Do you really want an answer to that last question? Muwhahahahahahahah. j/k

    So Cell desided that staying away from the group was the best way to deal, huh? Interesting. Seems as though the plan may have backfired.

    Glad that Bulma still has her brains and Chichi still has her... uh... heart. :)
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  • From ANON - macha on September 14, 2004
    Ah, this was very angsty. I did like it though. It also seemed to have given a little bit of information about what's going to happen in THK, not enough to give any big secrets away though.

    I've had my own share of 'why DID I get involved relationships', so I can kind of sympothies with Kilik. I also believe that it has to be difficult for Cell NOT to be able to love another. That really has to suck.

    I like this story more and more with each additional chapter.
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  • From ANON - Card on July 24, 2004
    Ahhh...smut. Does the soul good. *looks content*

    Glad to hear that Radditz is not his mate anymore, tho. Radditz is no good. (Speaking of which, don't I have a chapter to write? ...walks away.)

    Gasp, but I must say that I really like your Cell. I have no idea why or how (considering all things) but I really like him. *sigh*

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  • From ANON - Card on July 19, 2004
    *catatonic*

    ...
    .
    ...
    .
    ........
    *still catatonic*

    If THAT was WHAT you were going to do with RADDITZ, then I say KILL the bastard! *falls over dead* Anyway, beautifully written as always. Loved it. Adored it. Hate you with a passion because you're slowly killing all my favorites. But you're doing an excellent job. ;)
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  • From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on June 29, 2004
    Oh gosh...why did Kakarott have to say "well then show me!?"
    Now Cell is going to show him death!!! NO!
    Oh yay that was 4 me and I loved every last bit of it! woo hoo!
    you are so awesome.
    I loved the description of Cell's hair as leaves and his personality is definately an addicting one.
    Oh and Goku was so awesome...so in character when he walks by Piccolo and ahow how he is doing...loved that so much.
    You really are an amazing writer. Cell is just ugh! Seeking out to make someone an orphen how cruel! *sobs* poor saiyajins, poor Kabu.
    I think Goku did a very good job at kicking Cell's booty!
    As long as Vegeta and Goku both got to Heaven then I will be fine b/c they will be together...lol
    But Cell is just so...scary, he is heartless. It really is rather sad to read. Especially when Goku saw Vegeta...what was left of Vegeta...gosh that's enough to make tears stain my eyes.
    I can't wait until the next chapter!!!!!

    ^.*
    -MB-

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  • From ANON - Hecate18 on June 29, 2004
    ::meeps:: Wow I've missed alot!

    That was great!!!
    You've really left me speechless. It was so sad... Poor Piccolo and 17, and Vegeta's dead! ::sobs:: Poor Goku! U_U

    Everything is now starting to fall into place, I had a feeling Kabu was Goku/Kakarot and Vegeta's son.

    ...Whats this, the next chapter has blood, death and destruction!!!
    ::Runs off to steal Mirai Trunks time machine::
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on June 29, 2004

    That was great!!!!


    I hope Marai Cell helps out.


    Keep up the good work!



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  • From ANON - Card on June 29, 2004
    *sobs until she can sob no more * My pooor Poooooor pooooooooooooooooooooooor Goku! (Or Kakarot, as the case may be.) You're a vicious meanie, Cell! *says this from behind rock.*

    *goes forth to find Gohan * *kicks Gohan from behind large rock *

    Okay. I knew this was going to happen, but dammit! I'm still upset that Goku had to die. Poor dear. *pats him * At least he was impressive there for a few moments. *sniffle*

    Well, now that I'm all depressed about the death of my favorite, I'm going to go write smut!

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  • From ANON - Card on June 28, 2004
    Okay, excuse this gut reaction:
    That low power level you are talking about had better not belong to Goku, because Gooes oes not have a low power level.

    Now that that is out of the way:

    *hops around like mad * Yay! Yay! Yay! I knew it I knew it I knew it! I'm so happy. But how? (Ah, note the vagueness.)

    Yes, Cell is a bit psycho isnt' he? But if you got killed, brought back and then were faced with the people that were responsible for your death the first time (why didn't he kill Gohan? He's going to kill Gohan, right? Please? ...*sigh * Right, I'll go reread the first chapter.) I'm a fair bit upset that Vegeta got killed the way he did. Poor boy. *pats him *

    Sigh, but its just so good. Disturbingly good. (Now, when we get into scene were Goku dies, I might not be your friend. *glower * But I'll get over it. ;) )

    Now, go work on Kalika! Go! Go! *pushes *

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  • From on June 25, 2004
    *throws sharp obj at at you*
    then
    *sobs*
    HOW COULD YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    It was so funny my eyes were glued to the screen...and my brother thought I had gone insane...b/c I was like screaming NO! Cell is psycho!
    But wow, you did an excellent job at writing this. Beautfiul imagery and Cell's personality...very nice.
    Everyone's personality was intact. But *sobs* Vegeta...I really wish Goku could kick Cell's ass straight to hell...but alas, I dream in vain. :(
    You did a superb job at torturing my Prince...you...*points to you* have no soul...do you? hehe...j/k *looks at you as fire and brimstone light up behind you and you start glowing red with horns on your head and black wings attached to your back* uh...you don't have a soul!...*backs away very slowly*
    I really loved this chapter, it was so awesome. I see the future cell didn't really want to harm them...but his old self kept egging him on. And just wow I loved it. You had the Cell Saga pretty accurate b/c the 1st Budokai game is pretty accurate with the time line of things.
    You write some damn good fight scenes and the dialogue isrealrealistic!
    Well...you did it...you made me all emotional and sappy. *shakes fist at you*
    I do hope Goku gets to kick his ass on some level. Avenge the Prince!
    ^.*
    -MB-
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  • From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on June 15, 2004
    Lmao at ChiChi shoving food into Cells mouth.
    This fic is so good..just so different. If I was ChiChi and Cell came to live with us I would probably be very angry, and it would be very hard for me to forgive him...but then again he is just so adorable.
    I wonder what all the emotions were he was thinking when ChiChi touched him.
    I can hardly wait for the next chap and glad to hear you are working on THoK.
    ^.*
    -MB-
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  • From ANON - macha on June 13, 2004
    Okay, I read the second chapter through my fingers. It was okay. Everyone has interesting personallities. I hope you up date this one or THoK soon.
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  • From ANON - macha on June 13, 2004
    *sobs hysterically* No, and A/U where Goku and Vegeta only exsist as memories. *still sobbing* I will try to read this as the A/U it's meant to be, but it's going to be difficult.

    Good writing. Good story, I'll see where it goes.
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