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By : Tonic
  • From ANON - Incessant Darkness on July 29, 2005
    I like where the plot is going and everything but it seems slightly rushed. I think it would help if you get a beta reader to improve you grammer and you structure and stuff. I would offer but I tend to take over people's stories when i do that kind of stuff so I stopped offering to help. Still I'm sure there are tonnes of people out there who would love to help edit your story. So if you fix it up a bit I'll keep reading because the plot is good.
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  • From ANON - sakuracc87 on July 29, 2005
    AAAhhh!!! that's the biggest cliffhanger ever!!! what's going to happen to Kai!! Is Rei going to rescue him? ARgh!! I wanna strangle carlton and slash him and feed him to the dogs..... grrr... lol, now, if you really want this to be a review, you could stretch out the details between conversations a little, like, to keep it going interesting and creating a more descriptive setting. Other than that.... I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!! hehe nice fic! a little gory on the rape, but otherwise nice
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on July 29, 2005
    This is getting really good. Man I hope they find Kai in time though. What a sick bastard that Carlton is. Hope he gets what's coming to him. Looknig forward to the next part where hopefully they'll get him back.
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  • From ANON - Ryu_chan on July 26, 2005
    nyaa!
    i luuuved this fic *___*
    please update it soon ^^
    i liked Kai more when he was innocent *_*
    but oh well...
    it's great the way it is now xD
    keep going girl xD
    luved your fic!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 21, 2005
    More rapes? Gang rapes? What is it with you and rapes? Kai can't get any more childish, what effects are you going too propose for him when he wakes up? And the killers, who and why, are you going to explain or leave it to our imagination?
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  • From ANON - dark-anime-slave on July 16, 2005
    ralmmfao, i luv that lil barbie zlut pit about how zhe cant open her legz( i fell off my chair!) anywayz, awh poor kai, he cant do anything T_T.........thiz ztrangly remindz me of my grampa, cuz he cant do any of that ztuff either, he cant even make a full real zentace ;.; well thatz alzimerz(sp) for ya!!
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  • From ANON - D.S. on July 15, 2005
    Hiya! I'm so sorry that I haven't reviewed for a while but I am now, so be happy! Man, Carlton is so evil! And poor Kai, man he must have the worst luck ever! I hope that you kill off Carlton in the end so that Kai can have his revenge!(Plus I think that it will make most of your readers happy, me included) Good job and you have a very, and I mean very, scary imagination. I am saying this because I find itr very hard to torture my favourite character! How do you do it? Well I still thik that you're doing an amazing job with the story, the only thing that I can see is a few spelling/grammar errors. Nothing major. So I hope that you will update again really soon! See ya!
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on July 15, 2005
    This is getting better and better. I love it. Hope Carlton doesn't hurt Kai and Ray gets rid of that pink bimbo. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - kiotana on July 15, 2005
    that was short!!!!and han't kai passed his stage of being a child to tell someone about carlton!!! i want to fire him so bad and load him up in jail for rape...and several other things just to make his sentence longer! mwahahahahahaha! die carlton!!! DIE!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Incessant Darkness on July 12, 2005
    I really love this story and although I admit you need a lot of help with your grammer I like its plot line. It would be great if you could fix up you grammer if you need any help just say so in one of you chapters. Other than that this is an excellant story. I especailly love the fact that you brought back Kai's attitude its really a great read when you have a snarky arrogant bastard who is cold hearted but completely irresistable. Anyways keep up the good work and I hope we see a lot more of cold Kai. Oh and by the way if this doesn't end up as Kai x Rei I will kill someone. ::SMILES:: Update soon. ::SMILES::
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  • From ANON - Anaru-Minime on June 25, 2005
    HURRY AND UPDATE DAMN IT!!!

    Minime: Shut up! Let me do the yelling! HURRY AND UPDATE DAMN IT!!!!!!! See! That's how you do it!
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  • From ANON - Ciepson Rei 666 on June 25, 2005
    I want a new chapter =^.^=
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  • From ANON - artemis347 on June 22, 2005
    KAWAII!!!!!!!!! i love this side of kai! sooooooooooo hot! love sarcasm!
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  • From ANON - Rei Kon chan 666 on June 12, 2005
    Hmm, the things are getting more and more interesting :3 But I want to know one thing: Kai was raped and tortured by his parents.When he met Tala and the others he was so shy and he couldn't talk back, when someone bullied him or so [expect the "Mariah accident" in school, when he really said something back :D]. And now, after Kai was kidnapped, he's so talkative and snappish. Why he wasn't like that when he was with his parents ? Tell me , tell me :3 But, we always have a "character evolution" :]. And that's the point !
    Besides - I want Kai+Rei :D
    =^.^=
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  • From ANON - Anaru on June 11, 2005
    Yeah! Now that's what I'm talkin bout! The Kai we all know and love! He floats like a butterfly and stings like when I pee!

    Tike: Shut the hell up! Anyway! Great chapter! So I see the old Kai is back so will he give the others a hard time? Update soon!


    Anaru: floats like butterfly! Stings like when I pee!

    Tike: SHUT UP!! *hit's her in the head with a bat*


    Anaru: @-@ butterfly ..... pee ......
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