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Reviews for To Hell Together

By : chayron
  • From ANON - Ariel Green on August 12, 2010
    This is a spectacular story!!! You've done a great job!! And I feel that you've pretty much stayed true to the characters!!! This is definitely a favorite. Goku X Vegeta fic!! Keep up the great work!!! :]
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  • From DevilWoman on January 30, 2010
    WoW I really love this fic. I will read the sequeal because I want to know what happen next XD and because you write good. ^_^
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  • From vegetapr69 on December 08, 2005
    I'm not mostly into Yaoi sotries, especially DBZ feat. Goku/Vegeta...but i I loved this one! I laughed most of the arguments and all. Great fic. Is the kind of story that I like to read, evenif it is Yaoi. The best of all is that you don't concentrate all your story into the sex scenes.
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  • From ANON - Kitkat on June 19, 2005
    Finally! Finally I had a bit of time free and decided to come back to DBZ fandom to re-read this story and finally read the last three chapters I had left behind when FF.net deleted it. I'm really glad with the way you conducted the story; everyone IC even Goku (at least in my personal view of his character) with all those inner conflicts and Vegeta, a bit too emotional, but I can see him reacting that way given the circustances; the kind of au-ish plotline is very believable (I have a weak spot for IC and well developed plots, but oh well... I think everyone with at least a bit of critical eye has it) and last, but not least, you didn't rush things between our beloved saiya-jins. Very nice the scene where Goku decided to take the lead of things and the succession of events that followed the act until the very end. I think you captured the feelings very well. Great fic indeed!

    I'm sorry I took so long to get back to reading and reviewing, but I think I had told you in my reviews at ff.net about my gradual abandonement of DBZ fandom, so I think I'm forgiven. Thanks a lot for your offer to send me the last three chapters back there when I left my previous review here in this site, but as I had moved back to YYH and SaintSeiya fandoms my infatuation with Kuwabara and Andromeda/Hades/Shun stories got back full force I hardly came back here. Sorry I left you hanging. ^_^

    Once again congratulations for the fic, aside from little grammar mistakes (that I can't really judge since I'm not that good in english grammar myself) and the annoying "the drt brt before him" and "ta cta complied" entirelly blamed on aff.net (I don't know why these mistakes happened, but your story wasn't the only one affected) I have nothing bad to say about it. In fact I'll make sure to read the other fics you're writing as soon as possible, specially "Deep Circle" which I already read the first chapter and the enviroment reminds me so much of a fic that I loved to the heart called "In lar'anth(sp?): Through darkest destiny".

    Ok, this review is oh so very long and you might be tired of reading it.
    See you later,
    Kitkat

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  • From ANON - Moonfinder on May 18, 2005
    That was a cute story, at least i thought so. Too bad it had to end. They're so cute. I hope you have other stories that are just as good. I think i'll go find out. Keep up the good work. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Xero Sky on February 25, 2005
    I really enjoyed that. Goku has an excellent voice in this. The contrast between his angst over Vegeta's well-being and things like "He ate my cake!" was great. Also Vegeta on top = yay!


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  • From ANON - cdkobasiuk on August 23, 2004
    A very good story. Nice lemon and perfect ending.

    cdk
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  • From ANON - cdkobasiuk on August 22, 2004
    This story is so great so far. Great writing.

    cdk
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  • From YamiHikari on August 19, 2004
    Puuuuurrrr... Lemon was a little short, but well-written. I'm definatly checking out the sequel. Hmmhmm. Very good story.
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  • From ANON - Killasandra on August 18, 2004
    I love this story! and i stayed up later than i was supposed to reading it. reading fanfiction until 2:30am is not the best thing to do when you have to work tomorrow. anyway enough with my blabbing. I love the slight angst of this fic. I seem to remember you mentioning someing about a sequel to this fic. I hope it comes out soon i can't wait to read and keep up the good work.

    Sincerly, well not really but maybe,
    Killa
    a.k.a. marik
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  • From ANON - Kali on August 11, 2004
    Come on, update! I know you've got the chapters, for I also go on the evilness that is FF.net!
    I need more of the G/V goodness...
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  • From ANON - ST on August 06, 2004
    Come on you know you want to hurry up and update! please my m8s totally freaking over this story.... i'm starting to think that he maybe gay the idae of goku taking vegeta just seems to excite him too much O.o
    So please hurry up and update (no pressure) coz if you dont do it soon i might be in jail for murdering my beate!ate!
    ^_^
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  • From on July 30, 2004
    Im Lovin Tha Story Good Work And Write More Of All This Good Stuff!
    ~Sassy~
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  • From ANON - Pixelgoddess on July 29, 2004
    Goku inhaled several times before speaking. “He’s a mule-headed, uncivilized, rude insensitive, aggressive, hot-headed son of a bitch!” he enumerated, looking squarely at Vegeta.

    “Yeah, that I know… But what did he do?” Piccolo watched the very amused prince.

    Loved it - loved it. Squabbling Saiyans, perverted Piccolo... Is it possible for something to be angsty and fun at the same time? Amazing that Goku has that much of a vocabulary.

    Have this mental image of Goku sniffing a sleeping Vegeta's crotch - Vegeta wakes up - "While you are down there, why not make yourself useful?" Bwahaha.

    Yes, I havst ist it.
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  • From ANON - NuTHOusE on July 25, 2004
    OOOOOOOhhhh we have male bonding
    These 2 have a lot of shit to deal with don't they?
    Bless 'em.
    Another great chapter
    MORE MORE MORE *giggle*
    Plez and thank u!!
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