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Reviews for Dark Deceptions Revised

By : Seraphyn
  • From ANON - Demon on July 16, 2004
    Absolutely AWESOME!! This is a fantastic fic you have going, I can't wait to see what comes next. So PLEASE update soon.
    And you were right Duo was HOT in that last scene >:)

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  • From ANON - LadyMidnight on July 15, 2004
    woo-hoo...wicked trio!! Does this mean the dance club scene from the original will come in to play? Thats my favorite scene....love the way you described Duo and Quatre. Be interesting to see what you do with Relena...lol Love this fic and can't wait for more!!!!


    LadyMidnight
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  • From ANON - LadyMidnight on July 14, 2004
    I really like what you are doing with this new version of Dark Deceptions, but there is one thing that puzzles me. How are you going to explain the fact that Heero, Trowa and Wufei didn't instantly recognise their lifemates? That is the part of the story that is throwing me off. Having read ahe he "Dark" series, the one thing that always comes thru loud and clear is the unshakable fact that the moment a Carpathian male comes in contact with his lifemate, color and emotion are restored to him, and he can do nothing less then claim his lifemate.

    This revision is good and the character development is great, but as far as the lifemates go, the original worked better.



    LadyMidnight
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  • From ANON - utsubame on July 13, 2004
    Alright, ve rve read the original and I have to honestly say, I really like this one better. The flow is much more pleasing and there is more explanation of what happened. At least I get the story way much easier than I did the first one, not that I didn't like the first one as well. But I don't know anything about Carpathians and so on and this revised oneuceduced the need for any knowledge.

    Now, next question, when will yodatedate? ^_^
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  • From ANON - Amanda on July 13, 2004
    Great story! I love The Dark series too. I've read every book including the newest one that came out this month. It's really cool that I can now read a fanfic on my fav anime series and book series, and its got 1x2 as well. I really do love this story so far and hope to read more soon! =D
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