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Reviews for Unbeaten Paths

By : CardDragonBall
  • From ANON - wendyghost on July 25, 2005
    i read all three fics and they were great! maybe not that gohan got with Radditz! but the rest was good!
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  • From ANON - Dikun on May 29, 2005
    I've read the entire series so far, and was sad to see that this was the last chapter. I think your story is awsome. You really try to keep them in character... well Vegeta and Goku anyways. Always hated gohan, so it wasn't too bad. Keep up the good work! Are you going to make it a trillogy? Gohan and Radditz's space adventure and probably something with PIccolo, because he's been acting all strange and being ignored. Anyways, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Hope to see it soon!!
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  • From ANON - Lestat on December 11, 2004
    NOOOOOOOOOOO!! You can't finish it like this!! T.T Sniff... What about Gokou and Vegeta?? You forgot about them??? Yo can't do this!! You can't do me this!! SNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNIFF!!!


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  • From ANON - Kaki on November 21, 2004
    You rock. *mwah*(big sloppy kiss) I am soooo loving the Radditz/Gohan Smut of Dysfunction. It just made my day.
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  • From ANON - Saiyajin-Neko on November 12, 2004
    Awww, Raditsu is kinda cute like this, not being a pig. Still can't believe he wanted Goten though...poor Goten and Trunks, lol. With the way he's going it wouldn't suprise me if he made a pass at Goku. XD That reminds me, we need more T/G, G/V action...soon. ~Nods~ Can't wait till the next chap, Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on November 10, 2004
    All I can do is ROFLMAO.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on November 08, 2004

    Chapter 18


    Raditz is hilarious. I thought the porn number was classic. (Math would be a lot of fun ;-) ) And Videl's reaction was priceless, but expected. I wonder what Vegeta and Kakarott are going to do with the drunk one. *smirk* I do hope that it will be funny. (I love your work.) Roshi might be upset that someone got into his stash.


    ~Webtester01~


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  • From ANON - Saiyajin-Neko on November 06, 2004
    Yay! Those were fast updates. Hmm, i really love that Gohan took controll, very nice. ^_^ (Sorrycan'can't donate...not aloud) Can't wait untill the next chap, Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on November 05, 2004

    Chapter 17


    Interesting twist. Athough I was expecting Gohan to do something like that. *smirk*


    Go Vegeta! Teach Goku those tail tricks. LOL


    Write the next chapter soon please.


    ~Webtester01~


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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on November 03, 2004
    Wonderful!

    Poor Gohan, thinking too much. Raditz will help remedy that.
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  • From jaygoose on November 02, 2004
    *cackles madly* Yes! Yes! *grins* Okay, now the real review. You know I feel an odd sense of foreboding...how am I susposed to compete with this?! *sigh* It's going to take a hell of a you you know. But I did love this however. So all it take for happiness is to wish you uncle back from the dead and let him fuck you senseless. Oh...kay. *grins* Won't be trying that. But I don't have uncles damned near a worthy as Raditz. That Gohan is a luck boy. Goku should really get over this. Everybody needs love he untight, bigety sons.
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  • From ANON - Saiyajin-Neko (again) on October 22, 2004
    ^^;; Hope your novel gets published...wonder what its about. ~Thinks~ Good luck.
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on October 22, 2004
    Well that was all around good. I love Kaki and Gend Ind I even got some Gohan and Raddie for me troubles. I love those two you know. Gohan is still redeming himself in this ficcy though. he has done much in the way of that lately except giving in to Raddie who I adore. Anyways, I got a new ficcie started. (It should be posted pretty soon. Like when I get done with this) And I will be going back to work on 'Kalika' after this too. Maybe this weekend, maybe Monday. I hope. My roommate's been hogging the comp lately. She sucks.

    You sent your first novel to the publisher! I am so excited for you! That good! Really really good! *claps and jumps up and down* Huzzah!
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on October 22, 2004
    I knew it! Gohan's walls are crumbling.

    It seems Veget's are doing the same. *smirk*

    Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - macha on October 21, 2004
    What's up with Vegeta trying to ignore Goku? I mean, if he REALLY wanted some alone time, he could at least try to find a place away from Goku. Of course, that wouldn't last long with the IT thing, but at least it would be an effort of some sort. So, what is he contemplating that has his mind on things other than happy sayian sex with Goku?

    Ah, yeah, right, blame the alchohal Gohan. Phss, whatever. He wants it, and WE all know it. *shrugs*

    WahOOOOO, you did it! I will be waiting right along with you for pub publishers reply.
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