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Reviews for Emotionless Tomorrows

By : Nataisha
  • From ANON - jen on January 02, 2007
    damn review got broken off O_O), anyway what else i did say was that this story was very well written, the dark anbgsty parts were heartbreaking and yet you managed to weave lighter tones throughout the story.

    I have enjoyed readin g this a lot and i hope u keep writing stories, i'll read them!!
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  • From ANON - jen on January 02, 2007
    Hey there Rim!! Its me Jen, thanks so much for emailing me for youyr update, i just read the whole story again and all i can say is OMG!!

    Its painful for everyone involved you know, the ending made me cry, Tala killed kai wcich is prolly no most certainly for the best as it is and yet i feel sorry for the sick bastard >.
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  • From ANON - K.C on December 31, 2006
    *crying* My poor baby KAI!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't believe you killed him. I wish he could have gotten help and gotten better Tyson did love him right????? HE BETTER HAVE!!!!!!!! I wish Tala, Kai, Tyson could have all gotten better and been in love!!! :( oh well but I still can't believe you killed my baby. I love this story keep writing you rock
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  • From ANON - Demonrights on September 23, 2006
    Love the fiction plaease update
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  • From ANON - K.C on September 19, 2006
    I HATE YOU!!!! *cries* How could you be so mean to poor Tyson!!and Kai is not evil he's just misuderstood and your making him into a complete Bastard. ANd if you even think aout putting Tyson and Tala together I'll hurt you!! *cries some more* Ok I'm done it is a good story I love it but plz don't make Kai die or somthing so you really hate him that much?
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  • From ANON - KamiaKotai on September 19, 2006
    Hey,

    Don't worry that it isn't long, I'm just glad you updated. I will still remain a faithful fan. Hoping that the ending isn't too grave. ^.~ Great job anyway. Catcha' later.

    -Kami
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  • From ANON - jen on September 09, 2006
    OMGmkai is such a bastard here grrr i wanna lkill him despite me being a rabid btyikafan i really think he lost it and i hope tala cando something and sarutobi too!!

    PLS will umemail me when u update this???It would be so cool if you could!!!
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  • From ANON - aftw on September 05, 2006
    very interesting read ^^

    Hope you update soon... like... SOOOOOOOOOOOOOON
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  • From ANON - ami on July 31, 2006
    I hope you conitnue with your story and allow us further pleasure in reading this!

    great job with this. It's a bit... too angsty, but it's all good! ^^
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  • From ANON - SamuraiGirl2003 on June 19, 2006
    I think you're story is great!!! However, the amount of abuse Tyson takes is pretty sad. I can't help but feel sorry for him. Although, Tyson and Kai did have a Ike & Tina Turner moment in the car. The whole "Don't make me take my hands off this wheel!" was funny, in a sadistic way. But anyway, keep it up. I like this story and I'm really glad you updated!!!
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  • From ANON - Kamia (not logged in) on January 27, 2006
    Hey,

    I'm not done with the chapter yet but I just had to comment. Ian was so cute looking up at them and blinking, and then Bryan wiping the pancake off his nose and eating it! Aww I just love them to death! ^.^ Spencer and Tala just add in a little bit of flavor and there you have it! That is why they are my all time favorite team. Although I can't say the same for, My-Name-Is-Kai-And-I'm-Going-To-Be-A-Bastard. I'm sitting here going,"DON'T DO IT!" and yelling at my computer thinking, "What is he going to do now?" it's quite funny actually. Poor Tyson. T.T I'm pretty sure I read your sisters story awhile back because it all sounds to familiar. The Kai being a jerk to Tyson thing I mean. Well this is the longest review I've ever left on AFF and am glad it was for such a great story. I have a really angsty story on ff about Bryan getting drugged and raping Rei....Kai is evil in that too. But so is Tala. My account name is KamiaKotai if ya want to check it out. Anyway I'm going to continue reading now and finish off this chapter and move on from there. Catcha' later.

    -Kami
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  • From ANON - Skye on January 18, 2006
    Hi, I love your story it's one of my favs. Please update soon! ~Skye

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  • From Aliandry on January 16, 2006
    i love your story!!!
    keep on! ^^
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  • From ANON - Lily Carroll on January 15, 2006
    I waited for anciosa for that chapter.
    And I was not disappointed!!!! I adore the personality of Bryan and Kai it was wonderful and cruel....
    Tyson is so cute suffering.... Tala is a sweet passionate fool.. and I am liking story more and more.... Thanks for the update! I am happy!

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  • From ANON - Liah on January 14, 2006
    poor Tyson *cuddles him* i feel so sorry for him, thats so sad, kai is such a bastard in this >.
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