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Reviews for Come Together

By : chayron
  • From ANON - Webtester01 on April 23, 2005
    Looks like they are on their way, and a stanger has joined them in their journey.

    I look forward to the next chapter.

    There are some spelling and grammar errors that made it past your betas.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on April 23, 2005
    i think i see competition coming in the form of this ragas guy.
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  • From ANON - DBZ yaoi lover on April 19, 2005
    WOw.I love this and it took me two days to finished all 13 chapters.I would love it if you continued since this is a wonderfull and great story.This is so adorable the way i think about Goku being like a woman when he said continue in chapter 13.Squeeeee,I can't contain my excitment^o^;
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on April 18, 2005
    great chapter wow what vegeta gave out was alot of infomation.
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  • From ANON - WEbtester01 on April 18, 2005
    Another great chapter.

    I hope they can get out of the pickle they are in.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on April 13, 2005
    Now that is quite the action scene!

    You descriptions of the events in your stories are very colorful and fun to read.

    Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on April 12, 2005
    great chapter and i hope vegeta will be o.k.
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  • From ANON - Spig on April 12, 2005
    YOUR STORY IS..........ABSOLUTELLY, POSITIVELLY, wonderful! I read the entire thing in one sitting and just couldn't get enough, i think you've captured everyone perfectly, in their thoughts, some reactions, I just love it, although i am very saddened by this last chapter, poor 'Geta, i hope he gets bettah!

    ~Spig~
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  • From on March 28, 2005
    Wow, I just read both To Hell Together and what is posted of Come Together all in one sitting. I enjoy both stories, there is something about them both that is quite intriguing. I like the characterzations of Goku and Vegeta, Vegeta in particular. You did a great job of showing how his pride would be the cause of many problems. I love how Goku is still quite innocent and clueless, but he isn't a complete idiot; You've managed to keep a good balance. I also enjoy the extra characters you've added in the sequal, and they add to the story rather than take from it. I keep going back and forth between respecting/liking Ahrae and hating her/wishing she would die already. I can't wait for the next chapter! If you're having trouble getting ahold of your beta, I'd be happy to fill in when they can't. Send me an email anytime. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Rosie on March 20, 2005
    I really love this story! It has some awesome humour in it, I have a bit of a obsession for yaoi... xD
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on March 19, 2005
    Chapter 9

    They are alive. *Sighs in relief*
    I hope they can begin their quest again soon.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on March 10, 2005
    I kew it was a trap!

    I wonder how they will get out of this pickle.

    Great story!!

    I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - War-chan on January 23, 2005
    OH, HELL NO!!!!! YOU GET YOUR ASS RIGHT BACK TO TYPING LITTLE MISSY!!!!!!!!!!!! Ahem...sorry pent up anger does that to a person. Well as my anger clearly says.....I'll just spell it out for you, UPDATE DAMNIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOUR STORYS TOO MUCH FOR YOU NOT TO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Ja ne
    GodsYouBetterHurryAndUPDATE!!!
    Miss War-chan ^_^ (anger now gone....)
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on January 20, 2005
    Chapter 6

    That was great! I hope they find Trunks.
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  • From ANON - The Chichi Slaughter House on January 08, 2005
    Hey! Nice update! I would be reviewing on ff.net, but accounts been deleted and you aren't on my author alert anymore. peice o shit. Anyway, loved this chap so far. Write more soon!
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