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Reviews for Certainty

By : Skyflower
  • From on October 21, 2006
    Hmm, I liked it. It almost seemed as if that would happen in either the anime, the manga, or just both. Great job! ^^ :) (:
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  • From ANON - Miss Woodford on June 21, 2006
    I've been trolling through the back archives since this site came back up, and am reviewing better late than never. LOL

    Very nice. Far too often authors think they have to chronicle every little move made during sex. I think this is one of the few stories which DOESN'T make mention of "Ed's massave erection", or "he shot his seed deep inside her" (Jayzuz, what are we women? Dirt? I don't THINK so!).
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  • From ANON - drake220 on March 16, 2005
    i liked it a lot! good job!
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  • From ANON - darknesscries on February 12, 2005
    Your story was good I liked it...!!!
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  • From ANON - drake220 on December 30, 2004
    i really liked this! it was so sweet!!
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  • From ANON - Jane on November 29, 2004
    that was cute.
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  • From Mic123 on November 25, 2004
    Very good, well done, flow is nice and consistant, very good
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  • From akuseru on September 16, 2004
    nice work! there aren't enough ed winry fics out there, and i think you did a good job of portraying the way they are perfectly.
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  • From ANON - DarkFeenix on August 19, 2004
    Damn, I looked at the list and thought that there is some new fic :/ It turns out this is a fic I read day or two back at your live journal. This is a very good fic IMO, even if it is PWP :/ You got pretty good characterisation(sp?) and your style of writing is good. Your dialoques are well done too... I wish I could write as well :( Have you written any other ed/winry storyes? This is ranking 2 on my full metal alchemist fanfic list, only second to the other winry/ed fic here, third is winry/ed fic on ffnet. Please do write more fics, I'd like to read more :) BTW, do you have ffnet account? Oh well, I guess I'll read your fic for the 4th time ;)
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  • From ANON - Elf From Space on August 19, 2004
    Niiice sweet little lemon. Great job of keeping them in character in spite of the abruptness needed to make a short lemon work. Thanks for the read!
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  • From on August 18, 2004
    You know I found it kind of scary that when I opened up your fic, the ad at the top was for a book on 'How to register to vote and then vote.' I guess I figure, if you can't figure that out on your own- you probably shouldn't be voting period. o.o;;;

    OK on to the fic! Like I said in your lj, it's very sweet. I like the added bit from the original lime scene regarding Ed's shaken nerves. I think it really gives more to the scene, as well as the characterization. You really got, especially Winry's speech pattern down well. I could hear her voice in my head with the lines you gave her, and that's rare. It shows that an author really knows their characters perfectly.

    So yay- awesome job. Hope to see more smut attempts from you. >D
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