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Reviews for Broken

By : Rocketman
  • From vegetapr69 on January 22, 2005
    I have to say that this story is the kind that I like....I have to say that Goku is my least favorite and see this kind of sotry is awsome! I always thought that Vegeta had the dominate mind in the fusion thing....and this proves it ::grins:: hope to read more updates soon.
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  • From ANON - MARIA on December 11, 2004
    oh how sad for gohan...i how that the kai's can help with more..update soon....
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  • From ANON - maria on November 02, 2004
    ok wjy is vegeta and goku acting this why???? it's scary.wantwant answers...maria
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on October 20, 2004
    Please continue.

    I figured something like that could happen, if Goku's higher brain functions were compromised (logic, thought).

    It would seem his mind is affected by Vegeta's attitude as well.
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  • From ANON - Violet on October 17, 2004
    An interesting twist on things. Goku’s mind seems to be in complete chaos and now… Well he’s turned into a cruel vindictive creature. I love it! Your writing style is very well done.

    I am interested to see where you will take this story it appears to have great potential, please continue this enchanting fic as soon as possible ^-^

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  • From ANON - gokumum on October 14, 2004
    This seems to be an interesting plot. Only 2 short chapters so far, but I hope you keep on writing this little piece. But, a beta reader would not be a bad thing, as there were a few misspellings and typos.
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  • From ANON - En4cerMax on October 13, 2004
    Great story so far. I like where this is going. Please keep writing more. :)
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  • From ANON - maria on October 13, 2004
    wow what's going on with goku...why does he sound like vegeta..please update soon...maria
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