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Reviews for Tyme an' Luv

By : Fyra
  • From ANON - dEePsKy on August 13, 2005
    w00t! this is heaps good keep writing
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  • From ANON - animeobsession on August 13, 2005
    Who is it!?!? I wanna know!
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  • From ANON - Silver rose fox on February 20, 2005
    OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, I love chiffhanger but I want
    to know who it is.
    Please update soon.^_^
    Your Fan,
    Silver Rose Fox
    a.k.a
    Foxxy.^_*
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  • From ANON - kari_remon on January 05, 2005
    Only 36 reviews? That's no problem... (don't blackmail reviewers.). You need to do some decent editing on this fic, I spotted several errors and misspelling. It's spelled "a lot", "alot" doesn't exist. Neither does "unthinkable" and such other words. And you confuse "your" with "you're". If you're low on ideas, you need muses or just to read other stories. You can email me if you truly want help, as I can't guess where you are going with this and therefore can't propose anything. Considering Kai's reaction that would have to be someone he doesn't like. Well he doesn't like many people but... he seems to hate Tala and Jonnhy a bit more, so I'm betting on one of the two. You seem to be in a rush, chapter after chapter, not caring much about space or descriptions of just about anything, it makes the reading to dense. Slow down and take some more time to delve a bit into the characters thinking and reactions. And personnal information should be placed in your profile where everyone could read it.
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  • From ANON - maria on November 29, 2004
    hey who was it that kissed rei? neways great chapter. update next chapter soon.
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  • From ANON - bloody_WOW on November 29, 2004
    I would just like to say, that this is one of my more favourite fanfics. I really enjoyed reading the first few chapters that you have, and am looking forward to the future chapters that hopefully you will be posting up soon. You mentioned that you were open to suggestions on who the person with Rei should be, well, I suggest Tyson or Tala. Why them you ask? Because it would be interesting. If you completely ignore this suggestion, I understand. Keep doing whatever it is you're doing, 'cause this fic is gettin' even better.:D
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  • From ANON - Neko-chan on November 28, 2004
    Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Kodoku_wolf on November 23, 2004
    nice, i like it, though i wonder how kai found out the he loves rei? anywayz, was it rei's fangirls chasing him or mariah? or is it something else? please update sooon!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 23, 2004
    I have no idea what scared Kai since he's supposed to be the fearless boy...maybe a crazy really, really, really, really large bitbeast on a rampage or somthing...
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  • From ANON - Amy on November 21, 2004
    oh no dont be soo cruel !!! dont stop here i HATE YOU!!!!!!*screams* update update!!! ;-;
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on November 20, 2004
    To be honest, I dislike Ray/Kai fics but I do like good stories and urs is definitely good. I'm betting it's either a whole group of girls trying to find out where Ray is or one of the elders or a family member of Kai, Ray or Lee's.
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on November 20, 2004
    To be honest, I dislike Ray/Kai fics but I do like good stories and urs is definitely good. I'm betting it's either a whole group of girls trying to find out where Ray is or one of the elders or a family member of Kai, Ray or Lee's.
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  • From ANON - rejiita on October 28, 2004
    great story ^.^
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  • From ANON - Suki on October 28, 2004
    What? No how can it end there!?! T________T I wanna know what they were going to run from! Please please please pe upe update soon.....Quick I better thnk of some ideas to gice you so then maybe you can post more *Begins thinking*
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  • From bffimagine on October 23, 2004
    Hmmm... arranged marrige? This is why they're so terrible! What if the groom is gay?
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