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Reviews for Eternal Flame

By : Deb
  • From ArwenES on July 29, 2007
    you know. i hate to say it. but i read this tory after reading things like chimaera and time fault and out. so ou can see why i feel like this story is crap. these last two chapters had me grimacing at the sheer stupidity of it all even after i mostly skimmed. but since this is one of ur earlier stories i suppose i can understand the lack of class. u had to start somewhere right?
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  • From ANON - shivalatina on December 08, 2006
    WOW. You should post this on MM.org. I'm glad I went to this sight to post my story to then find you rewrote a continuation to your 'Lost Souls' Arc. I knew you were evil, especially since you had Duo dress Wufei in a Tutu. Poor guy. This was a wonderful story and I'm glad I found it and read it. You continue to amaze me with your creative ideas for plots and stories. I hope that my imagination can one day take shape like yours does. I wish you the best of luck as I know you are currently working on your sequal to 'Equinity'. Congrats again on a story well written but I must admit this story was riddled with spelling errors. I don't know if it was you or if by transfering your story to this site it got weird. I think I'll check mine to be sure, but it's still readable. Bye ^_^
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  • From ANON - Shinigami02 on October 22, 2005
    *faints from delight*

    Yusuke: ...Is it...yanno, safe to touch her?
    Hiei: *frowns* Don't attempt it. You might lose a finger.
    Kurama: Hiei, it WAS your fault in the first place..
    Hiei: I was trying to wake her up, NOT get bitten!
    Kuwabara: *snorts* Way to go shorty.
    Hiei: *glare*
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  • From ANON - cve on September 12, 2005
    I loved this trilogy with all it's delicious 1x2x1 and 3x4x3 yaoi moments. You truly are a gifted writer and a dedicated one, to write so many *amazing* stories over the years on all these scrumptious Gundam boys.


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  • From ANON - bakahanyou on July 27, 2005
    Please make another sequel. *still laughing over wuffers and the buck's party incident* justice was served, ne roflmao
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  • From ANON - bakahanyou on July 27, 2005
    KAWAII!!!!!!

    I have to say that this is by far the best heero/duo series I have ever read. This series has many things other fics don't, namely a thing called plot. Well done. You really should be getting paid for this.
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  • From ANON - priscel on June 11, 2004
    Yo! thanks for posting Ch. 33, wow I love this story. And I hope lief's pop makes it through it. and what way to end thet cht chappy, can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - priscel on June 01, 2004
    hey hey update soon 'kay?
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  • From ANON - Solo\'s Ghost on April 14, 2004
    YOU UPDATED THIS STIRY YEAY! I love this one and Chimaera. This series is absolutely fabulous. I can't wait till you upadate this and Chimaera agian. :)
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  • From ANON - shikaru on March 18, 2004
    okay! i just got done readin chpter 27 so now i command you to finit!
    it!
    duo: by the power of shinigami i command you toish ish it....uh was i suppost to say that, right?
    shikaru: ^^;
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  • From ANON - Solo\'s Ghost on March 11, 2004
    This whole series has been so fantastic. I am glad that Leith and Paul are doing well they are such a cute couple (as are Shane and Fayah in my opinion). The wedding was wonderful and the terrible twosome were perfect poor Benny i hope his hangover was not too bad (hehehehe). The plot line has been fantasic as well what is gonna happen when Grant finds out there are no more Gusndams? Please keep updating this and Chimera (what can I say I love your work) Please. There is so much more out find out I can't wait. Oh yeah and one more thing is Heero gonna fiigure out Duo wants to get married? Oh well keep up the amazing work :)
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  • From ANON - Kort on February 27, 2004
    Yay, 'nother chappy! ~Does happy dance.~ I liked it. ~Bows before Shenlong.~ Oh, Great One, never leave us to drift without your amazing words of wisdoms (fics). Sorry I get very carried away, but I love this series. It is really good. I cannot wait for your next chapter.
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  • From ANON - shikaru on February 22, 2004
    i am just beginning to read this........i love your chimaera......sa msa makin my own story about duo......hohohohoh.....duo:"what are you scheming in that head of yours?......." shikaru:"nuttin my pet....."*smiles evilly*......duo: " um we need those guys with the sedation in here.....*scary girlfriend*"....shikaru:"come to me , duo-sama"{apologies to all perverts of duo!}
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  • From ANON - Kort on February 09, 2004
    Hello, first off I would like to say that I love your stories. This one is great. I love the bachelor party, or bucks party is what I think you called it. I love Leith. He is great. Write faster or I will fly to Australia and chase you with a spork if you do not continue writing! Pwease! *Big puppy dog eyes.* I am just kidding, please do not hurt me or deprive me of any more of your stories like my evil internet does. I have a friend that like me has read all your stories (well she hasn't gotten to this one and Chimaera yet, but I guess I can forgive her). I can't wait for the next chapter. I NEED MORE ETERNAL FLAME!!!! I am a Gundamk. k. *hides in corner and cries*.
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  • From ANON - Ryumu on February 03, 2004
    I must confess I don't like yaoi very much ordinary... But I do love your writing : with you Heero and Duo are so well together...Love your stories...go on
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