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Reviews for Their First Time

By : bigtrw
  • From ANON - AMAZED on March 15, 2006
    liking the whole she uses the info against him thing. but would gohan just tell her like that? and everything? theres one thing saying that your 1/2 alien its another saying you transform into giant monkeys she didnt have to know all of that straight away! and didnt have to know that goku would have destroyed the bloody earth! was videl a virgen? im sorry but i (urgm) this person i know (cough) was a total klutz the first time and totally embarrased...WATS WITH THE BOLDNESS? do not get me wrong though THIS IS NOT A FLAME :)
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  • From ANON - wow on May 06, 2005
    OMKami, that was AMAZING!!! This story has got to get more reviews! ITS SO GOOD! I LOVE HOW YOU PORTRAYED GOHAN! HE's SO FUCKING SEXY!!!!!
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  • From ANON - minime on February 15, 2005
    more more more
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  • From ANON - Birdy06 on September 17, 2004
    Will there be more chpts after this?Please update this fic. Arigatou!
    JA NE!
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  • From ANON - swiss miss on February 22, 2004
    um, wow?
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  • From ANON - hanimeangel on February 20, 2004
    WOW!!!!Aperently I was right.If I thought the firs chapter was good,this definately tops it.WOW!!Write some more.I loved the sex scenes.This is actualy the first lemon fic I've read about Gohan and Videl.Although I have read many other lemon fics.This was great.Keep it up.TTFN.
    DRAGONBALL Z RULES!!!!!!!


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  • From ANON - hanimeangel on February 20, 2004
    Loved the story.It was sooooo romantic.Not to mention totally 'hot'.It was great,and that was only thea first chapter.Well on to the second chapter.I'm sure it will be just as good.
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  • From ANON - Acid on November 26, 2003
    Dman, I just read two of your fics in a row, both about 'first times'. You're very good at expressing first love and, uh, first "loveLoveLove your work!
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  • From ANON - Keiko on July 19, 2003
    Great G/V fic! Probably one of the best I've seen. Keep up the awesome work!
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  • From ANON - somebody on July 18, 2003
    that was the most awsome thing I have ever read in my entire life. I can barely believe that I got to read that for free. you should be charging a dollar per minute for people reading this, and you'd become a millionair. fucking excellent, the best DBZ fiction ever.
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  • From ANON - Taro M.D on May 23, 2003
    hey there Eternal .... i'm like been one of your fans long before Fanfiction.Net implied the anti NC-17 rules ... and it seems i can't find of of your stories much anymore dude ... this has been one of my favourites fowhilwhile and why don't you make a website with all the fictions that you have done and i mean all of them
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  • From ANON - Sean on May 14, 2003
    This is a good one. Good job, hope u continue i mean u better...
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  • From ANON - Chibi-D on January 25, 2003
    Well GAWD DAMN!!
    *jaws hit floor*
    *thinks really harr wor words*
    WOW .....that was definitely a WOW
    You should serly tly think about writing mchapchapters.
    I would lie that very very much.

    GAWD YOU MAKE GOHAN SOUND SO FREAKIN' SEXY!!!!!

    *huggles*
    Hope to hear from ya Chibi-D
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  • From ANON - adbzfan2k03 on January 01, 2003
    I think this fic is so sweet. YOu must continue.

    Update Soon!?
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