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Reviews for International Relations

By : Switchblade003
  • From ANON - R_Winner on October 09, 2003
    Please Finish this! It's really good... I could totally see it playing out and I adore your style of writing! Please Finish this!
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  • From ANON - candy on September 25, 2003
    what a fabulous story!! It's sad, but so touching! I love how Quatre and Trowa have become so close and now Trowa's his legal guardian!! Yes, Trowa should DEFINITELY quit teaching...I mean, he cares so much more for Quatre and he'd probably get sued because he can't hide how he cares for him. Plus going on active duty will pay MUCH MORE than teaching! And Quatre could go with him! I think that's the best plan yet and maybe....maybe eventually Trowa can permanently adopt Quatre, I mean Quatre's 17 and under law he can go with anyone he chooses to live with if there's enough evidence against the parents. Then, to the public eye, Trowa will be Quatre's new father and Quatre will stop being a juvenile delinquent and actually make himself something worthwhile...but inside their house, they'd be lovers and companions! HOW ROMANTIC! You MUST continue this asap! Are you posting stories at your new site?! I really hope you update this soon! I'll check back here and your site soon!! UPDATE!!!
    luv,
    Candy
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  • From ANON - AJ McKay on May 26, 2003
    Well, I just got done reading International Relations and I was impressed. Your story had substance, a plot, and you thought out most twists and turns. About Quatre's character being OOC I can see that he is sort of, but we all interpret his character differently. With a father like his Quatre could have dam well turned out that way. Quatre being punk is better than Quatre in a dress (don't you hate those authors that make Quatre so dam feminine, s qus quite disturbing). Quatre can hold is own and is tough, that's the Quatre that is more true to the character. Trowa being a bitentaental on Quatre is also true. It's shown in the end of the GW episodes when Trowa carries Quatre after he is injured.

    There is a few mistakes. Sometimes a misplaced word that is easy to look over. When a character is thinking to themselves you tend to use a first person approach, which isn't wrong, just confusing. Going from third to first person even for just a sentence can be a bit unsettling. You don't do this often so don't worry that it is that big of a deal. Some chapters you don't space between paragraphs this is slightly annoying.

    All I can say about the age difference between the two protagonists is that in four years there won't seem to be that much of a break.

    For the record I am a Catholic (not too strict about many of the "rules") and a moderate when it comes to politics. I've voted for many Republicans in the past and will in the future. I love your story and I don't see any phedophilia in it, two consenting adults, what's wrong with thatI thI think you made a comment about this in Fight Club...)

    Keep writing and improving. luc luck!
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  • From ANON - Usako on May 24, 2003
    AH!!!!!!! I FINALLY FOUND IT!!!! I thought i'd never find your fic again!! *Cries* Why was it deleted off fanfiction.net? b/c of the whole teacher/student thing? If that's why, well then that's just plain dumb. I LOVE THIS FIC!! Keep up the great writing!!
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  • From ANON - Takaro on May 21, 2003
    *does his last little dance, waving his pretty 3x4 flag all around before darting off*
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  • From ANON - ^_^annabellemanix^_^ on May 21, 2003
    ack! you BETTER continue this arc! im loving this story! poor quatre... ;_; but hopefully trowa makes it allllllll better, ne?
    oh and congrats on your graduation! (omedetou gozaimasu!) have fun, graduate, then get back to the story! ^_^;;
    ^_^annabellemanix^_^
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  • From ANON - Fabi-chan on May 21, 2003
    Well....I don't really know what to say here, and I don't really know if I wanna say it here, so I'll send you an e-mail ok?! For know I'll just say.....WONDERFUL WORK!!!!
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  • From ANON - Forsaken (too tired to log in) on May 20, 2003
    Wow, I am definitely in love with this story. Your characterizations of Quatre and Trowa are magnificant and very well written. I especially love what you've done with Quatre. Seeing him in such a different light is just glorious. Now, I can't wait to see how these two continue on now that Quatre is in Trowa's care. Hurry soon with more!

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  • From ANON - Candice on May 20, 2003
    This ondeonderful. I just love this story. Please continue soon!
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  • From ANON - Takaro on May 19, 2003
    *sniffles* Poor Q-man. I think I missed the beating...or something...I missed a lot. I mean I read it...but yeah...*soft grin* I guess life is catching up. ANYWAYS! I can't wait to see a lot more...erm...read a lot more so I can do another little dance for you. Ja!
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  • From ANON - Icz on May 18, 2003
    Please tell me both Mr. Winner and Duo are force fed their own interal organs at some point in the future. Personally I'm for putting them in a car, setting it on fire, and shoving if off a high cliff with many, MANY sharp rocks.


    Icz
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  • From ANON - Fabi-chan on May 18, 2003
    Poor Q-chan. =( His father is soooo mean =( But now Trowa is his legal guardian ^-^ (at leats temporaly) This is good....now they will live together, but it can bring soem legal problems....Anyway...as always a great chapter.
    I loved that speech too. Itīs wonderful.....^-^ "IR" is really a great fic, and you sure made a wonderful job on the characters personality.
    Oh by the way....Hi John!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Fabi-chan on May 14, 2003
    ^-^ This keeps getting better and better....but this thing about Qīs dad being a...(how did you call it????) a yeah...drunkard. It worries me...Q had sure suffered a bit in this fic neh?
    As alwasys this chapter was great....I donīt know if I ady tdy told you this, but this fic is one of the best Iīve ever read. It has an original plot, it is very well writed and it deal with many emotions, although it is a bit angsty...and the best of all is that I can feel the emotions (I donīt know if Iīm amking ant sence here...I hope you understand what Iīm trying to say)
    Oh! And one more thing....about what you said about liking an older Tro/ younger Quat relationship....I think that it is totally kawaii. It makes sence...have you ever read `Stray Cats` by the fabulos Fablesppiner???? Itīs not pedophile īcause Quatre isnīt a minor, but he is 24 and Trowa is 40. It a very nice fic and if by the way you didnīt read it I suggest you do so. ^-^
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  • From ANON - Takaro on May 14, 2003
    *bounces* yay! I've been mentioned! *grins and gets comfy on his couch waving his 3x4 flag around* more more! I want more! gah! *ish drug off by Kya-chan* Nuuu! MORE!!!!
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  • From ANON - Rez on May 12, 2003
    Awww. Poortotured Quatre. Nice touch having Duo in there as Quatre's first love. A definatly kewl jealouse scene. Poor Trowa, being pushed away. ell, keep it up. Can't wait for after the emotional turmoil. Keep typin'
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