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By : GeminiStarlight
  • From ANON - EscagirlUK on March 02, 2005
    Oooh, nice fic. Write more! I wanna see Kai *grovel*!
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on February 28, 2005
    This is getting to be a really good story. I'm really looking forward to reading more. Hope Kai and Tyson work their problem out and we see some pairings soon. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - sverver on February 19, 2005
    this is a verry nice storrie. i realy like it!!!!!!! i'm nervous to know what happens in the nexst chapter! espacialy because i want to know how tyson's and tala's friendship contius!!!! please keep this storry up.
    good luck with writing!!!!!!

    ( sorry if i din't spel something right but i have problems with english on school ( i'm from the netherlands)
    stephanie verver


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  • From ANON - modesta on December 29, 2004
    i'm really likeing this story but i have to ask when the ty/ka comes in because im a die-hard ty/ka fan
    and i'd really like to see that more seing as you put that for the pairings and have it come in to play.
    and i'm starting to get warry at the fact that it starting to sound like a tyson/tala pairing and that that
    thought is starting to turn me off of this story but im still praying that it is a true ty/ka thick and thin.
    PPPPPLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! update soon and lessen my fears. thanks
    ja ne

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  • From ANON - kari_remon on December 28, 2004
    Loved this chapter. Even if it still feels a tad out of character it's real good seing how you describe their feelings so easely (and you're not english). Are these the first hints of a TysonxTala thing or will turn into some sort of brotherly love?
    hum, I wonder if the watcher was Bryan feeling jealous of Tyson... well, guess I have to wait to find out.
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  • From ANON - Terra on December 26, 2004
    So Takao and Tala are freinds now who is going to get Jealous? and well Tala and Takao help eachother to get the people they love? maning Kai and Rei? I think that would be nice
    But's it up to you now no rush on it good work on this one.
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on December 21, 2004
    This is getting really good. Hope to see more very soon. I really love Tyson/Tala friendship. I wish it could be more and Kai with Max, but I love TyKa pairings so I don't mind. Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on December 21, 2004
    This is getting really good. Hope to see more very soon. I really love Tyson/Tala friendship. I wish it could be more and Kai with Max, but I love TyKa pairings so I don't mind. Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Tallia on December 20, 2004
    Whos were the pair of eyes?! Tell mee!!! @_@
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  • From ANON - kari_remon on December 15, 2004
    Very good, very good indeed. Amasing how you, not being english, are writing much better then half the english speakers around this site. Honestly, I didn't see any typos, the editing is perfect, the words are all well chosen - or should I say are well picked? It seems you chose every single word you used with extreme care, that's the kind of author I like, the one that writes, not the one that makes something and then publishes it... The conversation between Tyson and Tala, though very sweet and honest it felt a little ooc as I can't imagine Tyson being that smart and picking the hidden words. Funny how you had Bryan so nervous, indeed, he doesn't seem like the most talkative person does he? At this point I'm curious on how an art class assignment could join all those boys together (and just how are they going to fill in their choores?). Having Tyson feeling pushed by is Grandfather is definitly something new, one never knows how to feel when others expect something of ourselves. The way you portraited Tyson's feelings relating to that felt realistic. Definitly will be fun to read, please keep up with the good work.
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on December 15, 2004
    Good. For definite. This story has real promise. Although now I'm confused as to which pairing I like most. I really love TyKa. But now with this chapter, I think I love TyTa, and there aren't many of those on this site. Looking forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - shadowcat on December 14, 2004
    good chapter...........like the whole tala/tyson thing.............update soon
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  • From ANON - Yami Jay on December 04, 2004
    Very interesting beginning. I was hoping to see more Bryan and Tala in chapter 2.
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  • From ANON - yaoilovergirl on November 30, 2004
    really well written...hope to read more in the near future!
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  • From ANON - Fufu? on November 29, 2004
    Hey! This is awsome so far!! I hope you continue soon! ^-^ PLEASE?! FOR ME?!?!?!?!
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