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Reviews for The Private Fire

By : industrialmidnight
  • From ANON - gabelou1991 on March 16, 2016
    Is hot
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  • From ANON - sweet on January 08, 2007
    man fucking update i love this parring it just so hard to find if u no of any mroe of this set email a link to them at marlindon@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on August 15, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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  • From ANON - demonfang2004 on January 05, 2006
    I really like the story so far and I cant wait to read what happnes next so please countiue with the story.
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  • From ANON - advancedgamer14 on September 06, 2005
    hmm, i don't know what to say about this one.
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  • From ANON - Raman on August 20, 2005
    Perfect absolutely...perfect. Raw and impure...just how I like it. U twisted twisted person...lol. I couldnt help but become bothered! I want the saop opera...please continue!
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  • From ANON - kitauri on May 09, 2005
    Pretty damn good!
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on April 08, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - master yoshi on February 01, 2005
    pan and gohan incest! i lovedd it!
    i want to see videl and mr satan or pan and satan!
    videl and pan and satan in a threesome!

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  • From ANON - DBZ chick on December 22, 2004
    Cool! I really liked that. Good little story and good lemon! I imagine you probably have no plans to continue this, but it would be really interesting to see where all this could go. As the previous reviewer mentioned, I'd love to see a story involving Bra/Vegeta and Pan/Gohan. Keep up the writing! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Clemen on December 10, 2004
    Cool I don't blame Pan either. Gohan pretty hot too. Why don't you write an epic base on gohan/pan and bra/vegeta. I would read for sure. I hope you do go further with this idea. E-mail me if you do. Until then, take care.
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  • From ANON - Marie on December 10, 2004
    Wow. I really really liked that. Heh. Thank goodness it was consentual though. O_O; Lots of potential for this to continue... Videl if she finds out is going to flip. Also... did you say Trunks and Vegeta? :))
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  • From ANON - Lauren(peachylana) on December 09, 2004
    Awesome! I absolutely loved it (and the pairing)!
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