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Reviews for Shattered Night

By : Kira
  • From ANON - Lyralei on November 18, 2014
    what a great story! I hope there are more chapters soon. You are awesome (^0^)/
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  • From Lavonya on January 25, 2014
    Honestly?! It was /fantastic/!!! I like the possessive Goku... and that even though he's stronger, he's the Uke in their relationship!!!
    I really hope that you keep on writing /THIS/!!!!!!!!!!
    I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From 66Hiei08 on September 08, 2010
    Is this fic finished or are you gonna finish it soon?
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  • From Zofo on December 09, 2009
    Bulma and Goku really were like kids weren't they. I'm surprised that Goku could remember so many insults, also surprised Vegeta didn't blow a gasket at both of them and storm out.

    No preparation! Ouch! Typical of Goku putting others first, but nice of Vegeta to slow him, showed he really did care for him. No need to brace yourself, it was a great lemon :)
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  • From Zofo on November 30, 2009
    Well, ok, Bulma doesn't seem so bad now, but I'm with Goku in not trusting her. I guess he will have to speak to her eventually though.

    Lol, even Bunny spotted that Trunks and Goten should be mates :) Bet she'll be knitting booties soon now the cat's out of the bag about their physical differences to humans.
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  • From Zofo on October 30, 2009
    Bulma seemed to give up pretty easily, I was expecting more of a fight and some more sneaky moves. Guess you didn't want to demonize her completely. As long as she backs off I'm happy.

    I like the friendship between Goten and Vegeta and hope they can find a way to get Trunks to see Goten as a potential mate. Maybe he his has all those girlfriends as a cover and doesn't feel anything for them. Hope so :)

    What's this about a person Vegeta says to watch out for? Did I miss that bit or is it in next chapter?
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  • From ANON - chibi_vegeta on October 30, 2009
    I'm so glad you're continuing this - do please keep it coming. ;D

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  • From ANON - meshala101 on October 30, 2009
    okay first of all a chapter is never too long if the fic is any good, and your fic is good, I'm sure I can speak for all of your readers when I say we want more and the longer the better lol anyway good job cant wait for the update
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  • From Zofo on October 15, 2009
    Glad Vegeta seems receptive and what is that sweet smell he's giving off. He mentioned that Goku was acting on his Saiyan instincts so is he is heat, or is Vegeta?

    I like to join the list to kill Bulma, she's a right bitch in this fic, and I fear she will try to mess things up even more :(
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  • From navajo on October 10, 2009
    Loved the story can't wait for more
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  • From AkitoSouma on April 29, 2007
    Hey, I really like this! Please update soon. ^_^
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  • From ANON - christine on November 13, 2006
    I love this! I usualy don't get past the first few paragraphs of most fics, but I can't wait for more! When do you expect to have your next installment out? :D
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  • From ANON - enya of nexcuss on March 23, 2005
    COOL YOU'RE CONTINUING HTE STORY WELL I 1ST DISCOVERED IT A WHILE BACK AND THOUGHT IT WAS DOWN RIGHT ENOYING THE WAY YOU LEFT IT BUT NOW YOUR BACK AND WE CAN DISCOVER HOW TRUELY TWISTED BULMA IS
    TILL THE NEXT CHAPIE SEEYA ^_~
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  • From ANON - fyrbyrd on March 15, 2005
    My turn to be slow this time. But.... let me at her!!!! Please can I whamp her, real hard. Then the only rose petals around would be on her grave, all dried up and shrivelled. I will be patient. I do know what it's like I write too, just not DBZ...yet. Stilll can't wait for more, ta, the aussie phoenix signing off
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  • From Kugatsu on March 12, 2005
    please do continue! this is growing to be a wonderful story but the chapters are soo short it's torture! ^w^
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