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Reviews for Broken

By : Twitch
  • From Chichiriskoi on April 20, 2008
    the first chapter was pretty good but the second seemed well...rushed. I figure it would take Yzak a while to get close to anyone (even Dearka sadly) after what Kreuze did to him. I think you should maybe squeeze a chapter or 2 in the middle of the rape scene and the lemon so that Yzak has time to soften up to Dearka again (and encounters Kreuze maybe while Yzak suspects)

    but that is just my opinion. Just trying to help ^^
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  • From ANON - Lucien on July 24, 2005
    So... so beautiful.
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  • From ANON - Fantasy on April 24, 2005
    PLEASE do another chapter, JUST ONE MOOORRREEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - DarkMoonInShadow on March 27, 2005
    YZAK! AH MY YZAK!
    T_T *tears flowing quickly* Such an awesome fic!
    YZAK!
    Write more soon.
    YZAK!!!!! NOOOO!
    lol im a wierdo so lol ignore my screaming.
    Later days
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  • From ANON - Releasemeok on March 21, 2005
    really really good congrats do another story
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  • From ANON - nutmeg on February 10, 2005
    Oh my god...I could have cried...it was so cruel, but so amazing. Excellent.
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  • From Mitsuki on January 31, 2005
    Please continue! I want to see what happens when Deakka talks to Yzak, and what will happen to poor Yzak... but this fic was really good! Please write more soon!
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  • From ANON - Princess of the Cosmos on January 28, 2005
    I adore this story. I first read it on MM.org and now it's here. :) Keep up the good work and update soon.
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