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Reviews for THE SCROLL OF DEADALUS

By : RonniKatz
  • From ANON - Ri on April 19, 2005
    It was bloody brilliant! I want to read more! I can't wait to read your other story! Anyways great job! ^________^
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  • From ANON - Fuzzy Eared on March 14, 2005
    Can't wait for the sequel. :D
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  • From EmbersEye on March 13, 2005
    Thank you so much for changing the formatting on this story. I'm really enjoying it and am glad that it's easier to read now. :)
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  • From ANON - Hysteria82 on March 08, 2005
    Chapter one

    I liked the start of this chapter. The first few lines might be a commen enough joke but it fit the situation well and i can so see ed saying something like that. I don't see why they would have the oders not to use alchemy instead of just 'don't blow anything up.' I mean the idea of ed with a gun is kinda cool but seems so unlike him. i also didn't see why they would send alchemist if they weren't allowed to use alchemy but you did end up explaining that when they were assigned to translate that complex circle.

    Only real complaint is that that last line made armstong REALLY out of character. Seems more like something havok would say.
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  • From ANON - Sabina Jordan on March 06, 2005
    WONDERFUL! i applaude you: *applauds*

    need...more...roy/ed...nooooow...without...will...die.

    *smiles and hugs*
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  • From ANON - Keylah/Cringe on February 27, 2005
    ...This is a good slash fic for your first time ^_^ More please! ^_~
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  • From EmbersEye on February 25, 2005
    Continue but please make your stories more reader friendly, meaning please include more spaces between your paragraphs and dialogues. It would be awfully nice of you to do that with ur already posted chapters as well. :)
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  • From ANON - AKA Keylah/Cringe on February 24, 2005
    You're going to update soon right? RIGHT?! ^_^;
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