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By : JesseVargas
  • From Gwynhafra on January 21, 2007
    *gloomy* waiting eagerly for update, but it seems like such a long time. Writer's Block again?

    Hope that you'll update soon. The wait is killing. >
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  • From ANON - Gwynhafra on October 31, 2006
    This fic is really good. I'm kinda sad that the updates seems to be taking quite a while. Pls update soon. Would look forward to it. ^^
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  • From ANON - dana on October 01, 2006
    i really like the first four chapters so far. the characters you added are pretty cool and i can't wait to see more aspects of their personalities. can't wait for the next update.
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  • From ANON - Gwynhafra on August 22, 2006
    I liked this fic very much. Am a fan of MPregs. kekeke. Hope to see Roy soon. Update! Update! ^^
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  • From ANON - Hadrian. on July 19, 2006
    .... Ed HATES milk.
    you made al say that ed likes milk.
    T.T noooooooooooooo!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - JouKami on February 12, 2006
    O.O..... a preggie Ed... thats odd but so cool. i LOVE preggies guys........ please update..... me likes me likes
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  • From ANON - on January 23, 2006
    This is so cool!
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  • From ANON - OnyxLight on January 15, 2006
    This story is way WAY awesome please do decide to continue it.
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  • From ANON - blue_inu on January 03, 2006
    Hello, I have been reading this fic from before u last went and updated and deleted a few chapters it is looking better! keep up the good work ! I would love to see Al with some one that understands his more gentle side of nature unlike Roy and Edward. Maybe that character should be assertive but not necessarily dominant... Beside the point the grammar is fine but needs to be tweeked just a bit in chapter to the story is just a little choppy. There was a time frame on ur first which helped a little bit and ; to understand why Ed was sick from the begining.

    Please as a dedicated fan of FMA
    don't name him name the new guy Zack pretty please =)
    he will need a cool name to compliment Alphonse


    thanks for listening to me rant blue inu
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  • From ANON - blue inu on November 27, 2005
    Update soon please i love this story! Please make sure Roy realy gets what he deserves! Al Kick his ass!

    Keep up the incredible work that u are producing!

    Thanks,
    Blue Inu
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  • From ANON - Shera on October 09, 2005
    I LOVE THIS FIC! Please finish it please please PLEASE:)!
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  • From ANON - The Yaoi Mistress on September 09, 2005
    wow, this is interesting, please update soon, i really want to see what will happen.

    see you
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  • From ANON - moonlight_wing on August 02, 2005
    O.O......one word:....amazing....ya...anywho you must update!!!please? ^.~
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  • From ANON - talhia on July 29, 2005
    I like how the whole thing is funny and really good. The whole equivalent exchange thing was a really cool idea. The only thing you need to do now is update it and finish it soon, even though it's been a while. Keep it funny and all. I personally love it, and i think it should at least be finished.
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  • From ANON - kat on July 14, 2005
    Hi! A great story!
    but as much as i love it, it has a couple of drawbacks: I don't like feeling underestimated. I mean that, for example, it becomes fairly clear earlier in the story that Roy is her brother, and so with that "twist" at the end it sounds like a predictable movie. The same goes with the scars on Jason - it's clear who caused them; let alone that there is, at least I think so, just one logical explanation for Ed's pregnancy.
    So my suggeston is just let some things be a little more vague to keep our curiosity.
    Having said all that, I still love it and I can't wait for the moment Roy arrives. Please update!
    ^_^
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