Click Here!

  • 1

Reviews for The First Time

By : immatureimp
  • From JubblesBubbles on January 06, 2011
    Unbelievable

    *-*

    just plainly perfect! You even brought tears to my eyes with a fic of such sheer magnificent! The choices of words... the antagonism between Videl and Trunks, wheter one is frail, sweet, loveable, slow, the other is strong, hard, fast and equally sweet tasteful.

    Seriously, this was my favorite fic, DBZ fandom, but, alas, it enters my top 20 easily ^~
    Report Review

  • From rikko on July 25, 2007
    Good beginning! What's next?
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Chrysler on August 13, 2006
    "The first time Gohan fell in love with a man, it punched him in the face. Literally. He never saw it coming." ....Lol, it started all sweet with Videl and then Trunk's just blew the lovey dovey shit right out the window! I love it! I was picturing Vegeta the entire time in Trunk's part, and I wasn't complaining. Far from it. I love how much bearing Vegeta has over his son and what Trunks and Gohan have going on is hawt!!! Glad that one lasted forever. Good fic!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - zeynel on July 10, 2005
    I love it!!! ^^
    Report Review

  • From ANON - victoria on April 24, 2005
    wow i really like that love to see more storys like thsi
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Macha on March 12, 2005
    Interesting. Is this a one shot or is it going somewhere?
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Camaro on March 12, 2005
    I'm a little confused by this.. was it a summary leading into a story or just kind of an story idea? It seemed a bit detached to me though I thought it was sensable... very little emotion though.. hm.. your style changes a lot huh? haha

    Camaro
    Report Review

  • 1
T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!