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Reviews for The Wishes

By : boricuaboi
  • From ANON - Anon on March 08, 2015
    pan videl
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 25, 2013
    I really like this story as far as who should be the next victim I think it sould be Mrs.Brief but here a list of Characters I think sould also be some of the victims in your story you might have to go to dragon ball z wikia to see who These Characters are
    Akane Kimidori
    Android 18
    Angela
    Annin
    Aoi Kimidori
    Bulla
    Bulma
    Colonel Violet
    Cynthia
    Ena
    Erasa
    Fanfan
    Fasha
    Forte
    Future Android 18
    Future Bulma
    Hasky
    Launch
    Leena
    Lime
    Mai
    Mamba
    Maron
    Marron
    Melee
    Midori Norimaki
    Miss Buu
    Miss Piiza
    Mrs.Brief
    Nain
    Note
    Oceanus Shenron
    Pan
    Plamo
    Polly Buckets
    Princess Snake
    Ranfan
    Raven
    Showa Long
    Suno
    Towa
    Trampire
    Tsuntsunodanoteiyugo Tsun
    Valese
    Vegeta Jr.'s mother
    Videl
    Western Supreme Kai
    Zangya
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  • From mattcun on June 28, 2012
    plz write more
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  • From ANON - SonSofia on December 09, 2006
    Alright, here it is: Your story was terrible. Plain and simple, I don't have to say more. But I will. Uh, yeah about the 'love box' thing...um, that's not like...the way you think of it, is it? If it is, well I'm sorry. Yes, I'm apologizing because you know nothing of the world outside of your tiny, sick, virgin mind. The word, 'pussy' the way it's used in this fic, is not only nastier than usual (and not in a good way) but it makes the story horribly unattractive. *Cough*... A few words of advice: Grow up and come back with some more appealing sexual grammar. That's all. That and it should have been a boy. *Shrugs* that's just me...

    Oh, and Camaro and ChiChiSlaughterHouse, love you guys. Camaro, your disapproval of this fic amuses me to no end. CCSH, I'd like to know why your mum told you about King Dong when you were 13? Or should that remain a mystery?
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 22, 2006
    Ummm.... I don't know exactly what that was, but it was hot in a very twisted way. I wish you added a little more detail though.
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  • From ANON - majinshirow on September 12, 2006
    You know, I read the first chapter and I think that its unecessarily funny in many ways that I can't even describe!LOL Give me a warning the next time it will seem like this hehehehehehehahahahah!!!!!:D

    God gods, still lauging!*Chokes over saliva*
    O.O
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  • From ANON - joy on February 01, 2006
    eww
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  • From ANON - Big Red on January 31, 2006
    his next victem should be android 18
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  • From ANON - Andrew on December 15, 2005
    I think the next one should be a three way with Bulma and Vegita, Bulma being fucked by Goahn, and Gohan getting his ass fucked by vegita.
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  • From ANON - dick sucker on November 20, 2005
    bulma please
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  • From ANON - smokie on November 03, 2005
    all victims should be girls erasa and videl would be cool
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  • From ANON - . on September 26, 2005
    .
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 06, 2005
    girl
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 04, 2005
    ten inches is not the biggest dick ever;not by a long shot

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  • From ANON - kamel on July 27, 2005
    it was good short sweet straight to the point. Bulma should be next

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