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Reviews for Deep Circle

By : chayron
  • From ANON - Anon on August 12, 2005
    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!! GOKU!!! *Falls off her chair*

    Wow that is so funny - Goku sounds like my dog going all snarly when somebody so much as looks at you! HAHA!!!
    Well, hehe... anyway, t'was very cool. Might I ask what language you're born to? I'm getting the sense of Russian but it may just be me...
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  • From ANON - Raphaela on August 12, 2005
    Hi Jolanta!

    I just read this story and i really like it, its great! I cant wait for the next update!!!
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  • From Kugatsu on August 11, 2005
    Earth?
    Naked?

    What a direct question! Squeeeeee! *excellent*
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on August 10, 2005
    Awsome chapter.

    I bet Goku will meet Bulma again.

    If the humans were properly trained with Ki and such, they could increase in power over generations.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on August 10, 2005
    wow good chapter
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  • From ANON - E.T. on August 06, 2005
    OMFG that was hilarious! So cute! ^_^ Vegeta! *Spastic attack*

    O.o BTW I've noticed a Typosaurus: Nr. 1 instead of No. 1
    Or am I just picking at nothing?

    This is brilliant... *wants more*
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  • From Kugatsu on August 04, 2005
    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

    *squee* Everytime I read this story I just wanna curl up and feel fuzzy all over! It's sooo wonderful! You're sooo wonderful! It's all soooooo wonderful!

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  • From ANON - kit-kit on August 03, 2005
    nice chapter its about time those two got togerther
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  • From ANON - Macha on August 03, 2005
    YAY, they finally kissed. You know, I like the fact they didn't immediately go into a lemon. *nods* Seems so much more real this way.

    Update soon! I love this story.
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  • From ANON - chibi_vegeta on August 03, 2005


    much, much better with both spelling and grammar! could use some work on your paragraph breaks but you're doing better than several other 'authors' I've seen who speak native english. kudos.

    story line is coming along, though I do wonder why Vegeta is blowing hot and cold, and about the "flashbacks" or whatever it is that's going on in Goku's head.

    well done, next chapter soon!


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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on August 03, 2005
    Great Chapter.

    I'm glad that Vegeta and Goku reconciled their differences.
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  • From Kugatsu on July 29, 2005
    Excellent and so cute! I didn't read this story for a long time because I refused to accept this universe you'd created, but I finally did it today and am glad I did! This is so great!

    Huzzah!
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  • From ANON - Macha on July 28, 2005
    This chapter was adorable. The rasis, the talking, the swimming and the rain. I loved it.

    Thanks for updating so quickly!
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  • From ANON - chibi_vegeta on July 28, 2005


    well well...ask and ye shall receive...*snerks*

    felt kind of short, but again I spent hours reading the previous chapters so it's probably just me...

    sent you a much longer discussion via email...

    more dammit!


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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on July 28, 2005
    Wonderful chapter.

    Things are certainly heading in the right direction.
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