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Reviews for Coincidental Love

By : CrystalTear116
  • From REBD on July 03, 2007
    this is a good story but when are you going to add more to it
    i wont to know how scar is going to reacted when he find out that ed is
    now part cat and what he going to do about it.
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  • From ANON - kat on January 12, 2007
    What going to happen next
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  • From ANON - harryhollow on November 25, 2005
    please update soon poor ed/al they can never catch a break!!
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  • From ANON - sol_polaris on November 02, 2005
    beautiful except the alphonse pov was in thrid person, its ok tho!!
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  • From ANON - Shadow_Wolf22 on September 27, 2005
    PLEASE UPDATE I BEG OF YOU! :-(
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 10, 2005
    I'm not trying to criticise you or anything.

    But POV means you're telling it from their perspective. And I noticed that sometimes you reverted back to second or third person.

    ...

    But I think your plot is fucking GREAT :D
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  • From ANON - Rose on June 09, 2005
    Pleeeeeeeeeeeease keep going I want more cat-boy EdxScar pairing since I don't see enough of it so please keep going!
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  • From ANON - Kida on May 20, 2005
    Hi there I really enjoyed your story and I hope that you will continue with ehe next chapter. Later
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  • From ANON - kp on April 24, 2005
    Please write more I would love to see where this story ends up. I look forward to reading more and I love the start.
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  • From ANON - Vatic Kaiser on April 16, 2005
    Hmm. It's difficult to read. Your style is choppy and shakey. It's a very interesting idea, but the execution needs some work.
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  • From ANON - lelann on April 16, 2005
    very cool idea!! write more soon!!! what are they gonna do?
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  • From ANON - Sasha on April 15, 2005
    Hmm, interesting idea. The mechanics need a lot of work however. Spelling, grammar and structure could use some spiffing up. Perhaps you're new to this or perhaps English isn't your first language but I would recommend finding a beta reader who can make sure all of your chapters are correct. The idea, however, is once again interesting and I believe it'd be worth it to continue. Good effort and I'd like to read more.
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