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Reviews for More Than You Know

By : Chikara
  • From ANON - TreeStar on September 11, 2006
    I love this story so far. your story-telling ability is supurb and your grammar and all are great and it makes reading your work supremely enjoyable. i could never put this story down, but i have class in five hours and i haven't slept yet... Anyway, back to the point. I love slave fics, and am glad that i have finally found what seems like a fantastic one for FMA now! The length of your chapters is fun and really goave me the change to get swept up in what was happening, and i sincerely look forward the the next chapter! :)
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  • From ANON - mE on October 29, 2005
    Oh. Still love! Read this throug like billion times and love it still! Update so I can't learn the chapter by memory and stop reading :D
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  • From ANON - cryo on October 10, 2005
    ...and this, too, is strangely compelling. Will there ever be more of it? *hopeful*
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  • From ANON - hanami on October 08, 2005
    You gotta please update ASAP! I just can't wait to find out what happens next!
    It's honestly one of the best stories I've ever read! ^_^
    Also, please continue on writing The Stepping Stone...curiosity will kill this reader of yours if you don't! >__
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  • From ANON - nutmeg on October 05, 2005
    Cliffhangers are evil...but I'm loving this story. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Trigger_happy on October 02, 2005
    awesome, that was awesome!!!! i love it
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  • From ANON - nashkitty on June 29, 2005
    oh wow...this was a great story. I wish there were more of it tho :(
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  • From ANON - Aloe on May 19, 2005
    This is shaping up to be a wonderful story, I'm really impressed & interested to see where the roy/ed bit will go-- Please keep going with it :)
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  • From ANON - kitsune_girl on May 01, 2005
    .........WHAT HAPPENS!!!!????? OMG!!! That was so good....please write more....SOOON!!!! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAASE!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Dodger on April 30, 2005
    Amazing!! This story was very well written and you can tell you put a lot of thought into it. I truly appreciate how you were able to keep the characters in character even though you put them through a different reality.
    I have one comment about Ed, I was surprised you never mention the fact that he doesn't like to be called short yet.
    Other than that, great story and please keep writing!! :)
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  • From ANON - Shere on April 28, 2005
    well written and very interesting.
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  • From ANON - Horizont on April 28, 2005
    Great story, you just ought to continue! ^_^x Ed is so cute, and wonderfully in character, under the given circumstances.
    Roy in the other hand would, imho, be a bit mor sure of himself. Sure he never had a slave, but he's still himself, and I think it's part of him that he usually doesn't show any weakness. I liked how he kissed Ed though! ^^x

    About the lines at the beginning of chapter 7:
    I think Henry Wadsworth Longfellow's name wasn't spelled correctly, and the title is "The Witnesses" (plural) as far as I know. ^^;; Never mind, guess I'm half teacher or so. XD

    neway, I love your story and can't wait to read on!
    ~Horizont
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 27, 2005
    Good pacing and characterization, even content. Very humanistic approach. I think you're one of the few people here who think deeply about what they write.

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  • From ANON - Kiba on April 27, 2005
    Hi there. I really liked your story and I'am looking forword to your next chapters. Jane
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  • From ANON - RealRoyMustang on April 26, 2005
    cool AU story. Curious to see what happens and what the Sins have in mind for Edo...!
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