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By : industrialmidnight
  • From ANON - malimillions on April 29, 2005
    I definitely like this style--- especially the quick bits of memories explaining things -- short and unemotional even though they still haunt... also, vegeta's small observations with sight and smell --- great stuff!
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  • From ANON - Vegeta\'s Mate on April 29, 2005
    O.O; HOLY SHIT! Wait....I guess it makes sence. Vegeta picked Bulma for her looks and for her mouth...ChiChi has one of those attributes so I can see the attraction. Good job, just need to use some: I's, he's she's, hers, his' and other things like that. Seems like you were rushing the words a bit just to get the damn thing out. ^.^ still good though. Update Soon!
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