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Reviews for Journey

By : Bulma
  • From JebusOfNazareth on July 26, 2005
    Also note, I liked the previous two chapters, but they were unresolved. If this was the end, I could live with that.
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  • From JebusOfNazareth on July 26, 2005
    Not only is this still awesome awesome stuff, you emailed me to let me know. I feel touched.


    Very good POV stuff. Still as good as the previous two.
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  • From ANON - Liz on July 26, 2005
    I love it, please do continue. :)

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  • From ANON - maccam on July 26, 2005
    ooohhhh i can't wait to read more of this great story. i'm sooo excited and your doing a great job with them both. please pleaase continue this ...
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  • From ANON - Danielle on July 25, 2005
    I like it! :) Very different, I couldn't picture V/CC, but I can for sure see G/B. Good work and keep those plot bunnies happy!!!! More, more, more......
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  • From ANON - Maria on May 02, 2005
    NO YOU CAN'T END IT LIKE THIS.( looks at what's left of your body parts) I SO MUCH MORE OF THIS STORY. I JUST LOVE CHICHI AND VEGETA STORIES. WHY DID YOU END IS SO FAST....CRAP I WANTED A NICE AND HOT LEMON TOOOOOO. >.< GROWLS
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  • From ANON - Macha on May 02, 2005
    Damn it!!!! Why does this have to be a PWP? There are so many angles and emotions that aren't going to get explored in just two chapters. AAAAAarrrrrrrrrrg!

    Um.... Very well written. Yes, jumping the gun, but if it is only suppose to be a short fic, that is to be expected. (See above rant)

    I am NOT a Vegeta/Chichi fan. I am, however, a fan of in depth fics, and this would really have the potential to be one. *nods* I don't know that you would have to start with a couple of chapters before your first one, I think things could be taken care of by flash backs, but many things could be explored, not only with Vegeta and Chichi (BTW, I loved how you had Vegeta questioning whether or not Trunks and Bra were his) but also Goku and Bulma. (after the guilt is delt with, there is many steamy lemons that could come of that)

    .... Again, see above rant. hehe
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  • From JebusOfNazareth on May 02, 2005
    See, that wasnt resolution. That was just cruel. I guess it was, in a way, but come on. Oh well. I still liked it.
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  • From JebusOfNazareth on May 01, 2005
    Personally, I need resolution. How I get it, I do not care. But it needs something. (BTW, that means I liked it.)
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  • From ANON - Maria on May 01, 2005
    WOW your words to this story goes very deep. we married women do feel this way from time to time. I hope you write more and soon. Iwant to go on this jouney with CHICHI.
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  • From ANON - malimillions on April 30, 2005
    I really like this
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