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Reviews for Finding His Stones

By : reikostrife
  • From ANON - Anon on October 24, 2006
    Question......................Are you on crack? Just asking......I NEVEER thought ANYONE would use ALex in a story queit like this,,, not that it wasnt good or anyhitng, loved it, really did....But....Alex?
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  • From ANON - blue inu on November 04, 2005
    The story was well writen and if it is ur first keep up the good work! Just please don't rush the characters into the sex it kinda kill the story some times,but others it is callled for... Like dream sequence and that kind of thing.Keep up the hard work and i would like to point out in the gay world ear rings mean a lot and so do some placing of peircings of the body...IKinda weird but not unusual in the gay community ;p Anyaw i like where it is going and the characters are good and well placed not to much out of characterism here! I do like the pairnig unique is the best word to sume it up...
    Does Ed or Full Metal always have to be the one to get it up the ass how about Roy for once or Armstrong...Just wondering...

    Keep up the good fic!
    I Will Be Loooking for more
    updates to come!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Jantra on May 11, 2005
    ...That was vaguely disturbing. The pairing is... interesting. I think my mind is disturbed and unsure of what to think. You need to be very careful about the words you use to describe things for they can very, very easily destory the 'moment' you set for your characters. Also, you might want to think a little harder on how you lead to a lemony scene. From what I know of manga and anime, yes the man acts incredibly, weirdly gay, but he would not run around in his boxers no matter the time. If someone saw him (well the other person would pass the hell out most likely) and Alex himself would probably turn into an upset, blushing little girl and start going on about how he was sorry and would serve them until the end of time to make it up...

    Um, so yea. ^^; Thats all. You have an interesting way of writing though. Just pay attention to detail, watch the terms you use to describe things (if I remember 'brown eye' was sort of very, very wrong and disturbing in the middle of all of that.) and really think hard on what the characters might do. I think you got Alex's way of speaking down. *giggles* Armstrong is such a good character. Hope this helps!
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  • From ANON - freeeeeeeee on May 10, 2005
    Why does everyone bitch about spelling and grammar? People have too high of standards some times.
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  • From ANON - 123 on May 10, 2005
    I like it, i've been waiting for an Alex/ed pairing, hope you write more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 10, 2005
    I'm not going to give you a good review. You didn't bother to spellcheck and your paragraphs make my eyes ache.

    Edit your story and try again.
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