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Reviews for The Fallen Angel

By : saturn12sg
  • From ANON - Laurie Hall on November 12, 2006
    That was good!!!! Update please?!!! How could they forget about her??? That's interesting. I hope she goes back home!!!!
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  • From ANON - Nakazaki on July 25, 2005
    please update soon~!! this is a beautiful story and im dyeing to find out what the ending >.^ soooo update soonn!!!
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 19, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - DEEP SERENITY on June 10, 2005
    proof a little more but not bad, and progress with the other thinking about chi chi some more, but it'ss an interesting concept, so keep writing.
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  • From ANON - shippo-chan on May 30, 2005
    I like this a lot. bIt's very inteesting and has a nice plot. I look forward to the next chapter

    Shippo-chan
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  • From ANON - oznerol on May 24, 2005
    ahhh update soon or ill lose my mind ahhhhhhh!
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  • From ANON - DEEP SERENITY on May 24, 2005
    Okay, I kinda like where is is going, Gohan's name should be at the end of chap 2

    and if they don't remember chi chi, then who do they think is their mother? and why does pan remember, could be an interesting story
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  • From ANON - A.J. on May 23, 2005
    Wow, what a cliffhanger!! I absolutely LOVE stories w/ Chi Chi and Goku and how they deal with things when he leaves for long stretches of time. Please update again soon and good job!
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  • From ANON - Laini on May 23, 2005
    OMG that was so sad!!!! dammit man poor goku..and poor chichi.Update A.S.A.P. b/c i want to find out wth is going on!!

    P.S. If you have a way to let ppl know when u update i would like you to email me or something so i know whnever u update.I would appreciate it a lot. JA NE!
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  • From ANON - Laini on May 23, 2005
    OMG that was so sad!!!! dammit man poor goku..and poor chichi.Uodate A.S.A.P. b/c i want to find out wth is going on!!

    P.S. If you have a way to let ppl know when u update i would like you to email me or something so i know whnever u update.I would appreciate it a lot. JA NE!
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  • From ANON - deep serenity on May 23, 2005
    your is the second story today that had me...then lost me.

    okay liked the sad chi-chi thing, then you did a good job of letting me wonder who the group was talking about, chi-chi or someone's girlfriend but then...it all went down hill
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